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Chochee Medina Life and Times

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Summer's Heated Days
by QC Poet

Hello, QC,

Thank you for participating in the haiku club summer haiku event. I love your presentation... what a beautiful native American painting.

Haiku never rhymes. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good imagery.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
    Thanks for the Review and Continued Support.
Comment from mermaids
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Your use of words and poetic form paint a picture of nature. By the moon not reducing the sun's heat, the reader can feel the impact of the sun. Excellent use of words.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
    Thank you for the Review and Kind compliment.
Comment from equestrik
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This is a good presentation. The artwork is lovely and involved and thought provoking. Not sure where you live but it is hot here as well. best of luck to you.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
    Thanks for the Review and Continued Support. Life in Southern California's High Desert - LOL