Running Blind
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Running Blind ~ Chapter Eight"The Blind Girl's toughest cold case.
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Comment from Janetsue
I have heard that it is not uncommon for someone with an impaired physical state like blindness to develop extra sensory sensitivities. I was reminded of this when reading your excellent closing sentence....a good cliff hanger ending, Sally! xo
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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I have heard that it is not uncommon for someone with an impaired physical state like blindness to develop extra sensory sensitivities. I was reminded of this when reading your excellent closing sentence....a good cliff hanger ending, Sally! xo
Comment Written 21-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Thank you for the awesome review and generous stars, once again, dear Janet. You're making wonderful progress. I'm so thrilled. Sending you my very best,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Sally,
I'm so glad I have one six left. You did a great job putting this chapter together. But wouldn't you know it? ... the trucker's favorite BBQ pit is Al's in River Ridge... and Sally is right there! How to disguise a blind girl being led to a cafe? The truck is illegally parked out front of Al's... and where is the tiger? Sally feels she's being watched. Trouble ahead!!! Wouldn't you know it?
You leave us in suspense... what a dirty trick!
Well done! Keep up the good work, mon cher!
Where is that Jackson???
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Hi Sally,
I'm so glad I have one six left. You did a great job putting this chapter together. But wouldn't you know it? ... the trucker's favorite BBQ pit is Al's in River Ridge... and Sally is right there! How to disguise a blind girl being led to a cafe? The truck is illegally parked out front of Al's... and where is the tiger? Sally feels she's being watched. Trouble ahead!!! Wouldn't you know it?
You leave us in suspense... what a dirty trick!
Well done! Keep up the good work, mon cher!
Where is that Jackson???
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 14-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous stars, dear Kim. I was waiting and watching for you. I knew you?d return from the carefree highway. ;) I really appreciate this within your busy summer. I hope you have enjoyed all the fanfare from your award. It has been exciting for me to see you honored. You?re a real treasure and great reviewer. This propelled me to 26! I think you realized that?. Thanks again!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
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My pleasure, Sally!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
So much excitement in this story....hoping they will remain safe but with the hiding of a monster and perhaps a killer, it would be a little frightening to even walk near an eating place.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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So much excitement in this story....hoping they will remain safe but with the hiding of a monster and perhaps a killer, it would be a little frightening to even walk near an eating place.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and insightful comments, dear Rosemary. I?m glad you are enjoying my book. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs?
Comment from WalkerMan
From this chapter we know major events are imminent.
In Section One, a news broadcast fills in details of what was found when the sunken car owned by Lonnie Hastings was retrieved. Jackson mentions that Detective Lembowski is on the scene working with Dr. Maclavish. Also, we learn that the man who escaped had not been located, which is worrisome. The comfort that Jackson then provides is both endearing and a reminder that the participants in this story are more than just characters in a book.
In Section Two, Suzy learns that you know everyone's favorite flower. This is plausible, given your compensating senses. This subtly sets us up for this chapter's end.
In Section Three, we see how Tony Alfanzi got away by hitching a ride with an oil tanker bound for New Orleans. You tell us enough about the driver, Dwayne Cooper, to make us like him and worry about his safety in Alfanzi's presence.
"River Ridge...? Never heard of it." Yeah, right.... Trouble is coming.
In Section Four, in room 26 at the Motor Court Motel (which explains the illustration), Suzy plays a reply to her inquiry to Strong Again Institute in New Orleans about Camille Jean-Baptiste, which reveals that Camille might have been treated for amnesia there in 1999. Then Suzy requests to go along to Olivia's house in order to be a sighted participant.
In Section Five, Lieutenant Miles Jean-Baptiste makes it clear that Jackson had insisted he go wherever Sally goes, so the three of them head out to lunch at Al's Barbecue and Such -- exactly where Dwayne Cooper was taking Alfanzi -- and they even see his parked truck.
Realizing that Al's might be crowded, they consider going to the nearby French cafe instead, Moments later, your and King's senses alarmed; and we must read the next chapter to find out what happens.
Superb, and aptly illustrated.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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From this chapter we know major events are imminent.
In Section One, a news broadcast fills in details of what was found when the sunken car owned by Lonnie Hastings was retrieved. Jackson mentions that Detective Lembowski is on the scene working with Dr. Maclavish. Also, we learn that the man who escaped had not been located, which is worrisome. The comfort that Jackson then provides is both endearing and a reminder that the participants in this story are more than just characters in a book.
In Section Two, Suzy learns that you know everyone's favorite flower. This is plausible, given your compensating senses. This subtly sets us up for this chapter's end.
In Section Three, we see how Tony Alfanzi got away by hitching a ride with an oil tanker bound for New Orleans. You tell us enough about the driver, Dwayne Cooper, to make us like him and worry about his safety in Alfanzi's presence.
"River Ridge...? Never heard of it." Yeah, right.... Trouble is coming.
In Section Four, in room 26 at the Motor Court Motel (which explains the illustration), Suzy plays a reply to her inquiry to Strong Again Institute in New Orleans about Camille Jean-Baptiste, which reveals that Camille might have been treated for amnesia there in 1999. Then Suzy requests to go along to Olivia's house in order to be a sighted participant.
In Section Five, Lieutenant Miles Jean-Baptiste makes it clear that Jackson had insisted he go wherever Sally goes, so the three of them head out to lunch at Al's Barbecue and Such -- exactly where Dwayne Cooper was taking Alfanzi -- and they even see his parked truck.
Realizing that Al's might be crowded, they consider going to the nearby French cafe instead, Moments later, your and King's senses alarmed; and we must read the next chapter to find out what happens.
Superb, and aptly illustrated.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous six stars! Wow, you?ve caught up valiantly. I really appreciate your effort to do so with everything going on elsewhere. Life can be so crazy. My life feels crazy right now. Writing is a nice diversion. I was so inspired this morning after reading your reviews, along with so many others, I wrote chapter nine. That?s inspiration. Thank you, again. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
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You are most welcome, Sal. I'm glad my efforts inspired you to write Chapter Nine so soon. I enjoy helping you with your books and stories. If I am busy with computer issues next weekend, I'll catch up again. :)) -- Mike
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Comment from Cindy Warren
What are the odds he'd find her the way he did? But he has. Things are about to get interesting. It's a good thing she has all these people looking out for her, not to mention King. Tony the Tiger may end up with nothing but a bowl of Frosted Flakes.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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What are the odds he'd find her the way he did? But he has. Things are about to get interesting. It's a good thing she has all these people looking out for her, not to mention King. Tony the Tiger may end up with nothing but a bowl of Frosted Flakes.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the fun review and insight. So glad you are staying tuned. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs?
Comment from Bill Schott
Lots of information here that requires I keep a list of my own of who's who to who or why this guy did that. You are keeping it simpler, of course, with your updates and character lists. Great story.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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Lots of information here that requires I keep a list of my own of who's who to who or why this guy did that. You are keeping it simpler, of course, with your updates and character lists. Great story.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous stars, dear Bill. I?m so glad you have caught up. I?ll try not to add any more characters. I hate to be boring?. So glad you enjoyed this one. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :)) XOs?
Comment from LovnPeace
It is indeed a great pleasure to again be reading your superb writing my friend. What a marvelous job you do. Your eye for detail and drawing in of suspense is never ending. Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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It is indeed a great pleasure to again be reading your superb writing my friend. What a marvelous job you do. Your eye for detail and drawing in of suspense is never ending. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Barbara. I?m delighted that you enjoyed this. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally XOs?
Comment from MAMONIA
My, My, My, I am so totally impressed. This was such an interesting and easy read because it flowed along with the dialogue. I enjoyed the story and could picture the characters, because you brought them all to life.
God bless you. I don't know how you do it. But you managed all these awards while being blind. What is your secret?
I look forward to the next chapter.
My best,
Marie
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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My, My, My, I am so totally impressed. This was such an interesting and easy read because it flowed along with the dialogue. I enjoyed the story and could picture the characters, because you brought them all to life.
God bless you. I don't know how you do it. But you managed all these awards while being blind. What is your secret?
I look forward to the next chapter.
My best,
Marie
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous compliments, dear Marie. Your readership means the world to me. I?m so glad you?re enjoying it. I started writing about a year after I started going blind in 2009. I tell people God took my sight and handed me a pen. I hope to post more of my personal story soon. ;)
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs..
Comment from Wendy G
I got goose-bumps at the end. It is all reaching a very dramatic climax. Your story is gripping with great insight into characters and plot development - and exactly when to press the pause button! Excellent writing.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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I got goose-bumps at the end. It is all reaching a very dramatic climax. Your story is gripping with great insight into characters and plot development - and exactly when to press the pause button! Excellent writing.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2021
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Oh good! I?m so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the great review and generous compliments. Hang on!
Sal XOs?
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I could hear the " this just in" voice. In fact, ironically, I was listening to a flooding report as I was reading your report. Wow. You used you extra senses. To few people take advantage of their extra senses. The reader will be back for sure.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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I could hear the " this just in" voice. In fact, ironically, I was listening to a flooding report as I was reading your report. Wow. You used you extra senses. To few people take advantage of their extra senses. The reader will be back for sure.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments, Liz dear. I?m glad you?re full I?m this story. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs?
