The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 89 "Pale Blue or Ruby Red "Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from Anne Johnston
A great entry for the Colour contest. So many emotions are described by colour and you have done a good job of explaining them here: I really like the words: "Thank God colors also soothe as Calm is spread.
Let's try Loving what is taken in instead,"
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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A great entry for the Colour contest. So many emotions are described by colour and you have done a good job of explaining them here: I really like the words: "Thank God colors also soothe as Calm is spread.
Let's try Loving what is taken in instead,"
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the Review and Continued Support.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from royowen
What an excellent ode to the glory of colour, and let's face it, it seems to lift the hues and exhort them and make a very good case for the exhortation, beautifully written in no particular meter, mono rhyme, cleverly written in single rhyme, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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What an excellent ode to the glory of colour, and let's face it, it seems to lift the hues and exhort them and make a very good case for the exhortation, beautifully written in no particular meter, mono rhyme, cleverly written in single rhyme, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thanks for the Review and Continued Support.
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Welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun post about colour and the blue is felt inside and the red expressed on the face in anger, your unique write made me smile, a fun presentation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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A fun post about colour and the blue is felt inside and the red expressed on the face in anger, your unique write made me smile, a fun presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the Review and Continued Support.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Clever play on colors--apt for the theme--sobering and thought-provoking piece, despite its deceptively whimsical tone.
Prayer helps Stop transferring the colors to dred=>DREAD.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Clever play on colors--apt for the theme--sobering and thought-provoking piece, despite its deceptively whimsical tone.
Prayer helps Stop transferring the colors to dred=>DREAD.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Thanks for the Review and catching that spelling error. Blessings to you.
Comment from Jarvis Popovich
Obviously this was a colour poem. Great job with it. Nice transitions and rhyming with red and blue.
I like the photo and background you chose, too.
I like the wisdom infused within it also. You hit the mark with it and especially the end. Death.
Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Obviously this was a colour poem. Great job with it. Nice transitions and rhyming with red and blue.
I like the photo and background you chose, too.
I like the wisdom infused within it also. You hit the mark with it and especially the end. Death.
Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the Review and Kind compliment.