Fiery passion
Yearning and desire for hot passionate romance5 total reviews
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This is a very good description of those times in life when our libido seems to take a more important role than usual. Hopefully, this doesn't go on continually, or it would be very disruptive to the other activities of our lives. You have managed to provide an excellent, poetic description, without requiring warnings for either language or sexually explicit content. Yet any adult person can understand it.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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This is a very good description of those times in life when our libido seems to take a more important role than usual. Hopefully, this doesn't go on continually, or it would be very disruptive to the other activities of our lives. You have managed to provide an excellent, poetic description, without requiring warnings for either language or sexually explicit content. Yet any adult person can understand it.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thank you
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You're very welcome, my friend. May God bless you. - Mary Kay
Comment from Senyai
Hello,
This is a passion filled 5-7-5 poem for sure. Love the red background for the presentation. As well as your artful words chosen.
One suggestion though, I believe the word "fiery" is only 2 syllables making your first line only containing 4 syllables and it needs to contain 5 :-)
A tweak here and there can correct that.
Best to you in the contest!
Senyai
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Hello,
This is a passion filled 5-7-5 poem for sure. Love the red background for the presentation. As well as your artful words chosen.
One suggestion though, I believe the word "fiery" is only 2 syllables making your first line only containing 4 syllables and it needs to contain 5 :-)
A tweak here and there can correct that.
Best to you in the contest!
Senyai
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Romance and passion fill the air in your write and I enjoyed your ambient 5-7-5. To feel in love with another and have that connection fills our heart with anticipation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Romance and passion fill the air in your write and I enjoyed your ambient 5-7-5. To feel in love with another and have that connection fills our heart with anticipation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thank you
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Fiery Passion, has the proper formatting and notes that some romances are in the nuclear heat range, but in a good way.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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This 5-7-5, Fiery Passion, has the proper formatting and notes that some romances are in the nuclear heat range, but in a good way.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Thank you
Comment from HarryT
Your effort certainly draws on the reader's emotions. The picture does well to reinforce your words. I like the idea of the psyche being inflamed and the resulting lust for the loved one. Excellent effort.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Your effort certainly draws on the reader's emotions. The picture does well to reinforce your words. I like the idea of the psyche being inflamed and the resulting lust for the loved one. Excellent effort.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Thanks