Comment from Jarvis Popovich

Excellent

O, you are falling, falling slowly though, the agony without faith. Yeah, I'd wish better for your thoughts on this but I get the drift. You're a sensitive person and feel others pain, but what a way for you to explain. To be continued now continue to write for life begins for you tonight!

Loved it.

Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Thanks Jarvis and the second one is actually out now.
"A Dying Fall'' (B)?
Ricky

reply by Jarvis Popovich on 06-Jul-2021

Great! I?ll check it out :)

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

Though you have asked not to take out our pens yet ,i can type a review on the space provided by the site. very interesting beginning ,unusual. waiting for the next...

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021

Thanks and the second posting...
"A Dying Fall" (B)
It's posted!
Doctor Ricky 1024