The Chronicals Of Bethica: The Rise
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Chronicles Of Bethica"Abram must defeat a deadly humanoid race of beings
5 total reviews
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is another imaginative and well-written chapter, Amahra. Again filled with action and vivid imagery - too vivid to my liking, but then this isn't a genre that I'm into. However, I can't look away. I want to know what happens next.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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This is another imaginative and well-written chapter, Amahra. Again filled with action and vivid imagery - too vivid to my liking, but then this isn't a genre that I'm into. However, I can't look away. I want to know what happens next.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021
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Thank you Judy, I appreciate it.
Comment from Jay Squires
Another fine, tense, well-written chapter. I love what you do with adventure, Amahra. I see that others have felt the same, which is why your book was in the Book of the Month competition.
I only found one piece of SPAG; hopefully the same as Barbara's.
watching and listening for the presents of Ogres. [Ah-ha! Barbara and I agree "Beware of ogres bearing presence!"]
Keep this good work coming!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Another fine, tense, well-written chapter. I love what you do with adventure, Amahra. I see that others have felt the same, which is why your book was in the Book of the Month competition.
I only found one piece of SPAG; hopefully the same as Barbara's.
watching and listening for the presents of Ogres. [Ah-ha! Barbara and I agree "Beware of ogres bearing presence!"]
Keep this good work coming!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Thanks, Jay, I believe it was. I'll have to check back. Congratulations on your win, btw.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have a feeling these two newcomers are going to add some spice to the already well written story. LOL Thank you for sharing.
Gangus, However, was quick to introduced Ndornah and Melitah and bragged of their skills against the Ogres. (Lower case 'h' on however)
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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I have a feeling these two newcomers are going to add some spice to the already well written story. LOL Thank you for sharing.
Gangus, However, was quick to introduced Ndornah and Melitah and bragged of their skills against the Ogres. (Lower case 'h' on however)
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Missed that, thank you.
Comment from royowen
What an interesting episode, so much going on, releasing injured and weak prisoners, meeting two Amazonian women and together they manage to defeat and mutilste many ogres, with the fearsome women, and break free, getting Back to Brehira, Dinary and co. They are going to make a detour, taking the girls home. Well done, an excellent post, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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What an interesting episode, so much going on, releasing injured and weak prisoners, meeting two Amazonian women and together they manage to defeat and mutilste many ogres, with the fearsome women, and break free, getting Back to Brehira, Dinary and co. They are going to make a detour, taking the girls home. Well done, an excellent post, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Thank you, Roy. Always appreciate your reviews.
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Bless you
Comment from justafan
The plot thickens! Ganges seems too trusting for a man entrusted with so many lives.
(thinking out loud)
This is such a wonderful story. You've kept me invested with every word!
Bravo!!
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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The plot thickens! Ganges seems too trusting for a man entrusted with so many lives.
(thinking out loud)
This is such a wonderful story. You've kept me invested with every word!
Bravo!!
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much, Missy. When are you posting again? I miss reading you.
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I have a poem to post shortly
~M~
