Comment from Karen Estep

Excellent

Though tiny as a mustard seed...great writing! Sometimes a line grabs the readers attention and you got mine. Good job staying with the syllable count, and your graphic fits well. Good luck!

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Great reveiw zanya

Comment from Laurie Holding

Excellent

I think this is just beautiful. I love the way your art so perfectly accompanies your poem. Well done, and good luck in the contest! You have my vote, for sure.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Thanks for that vote and review zanya

Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

Thanks for Sharing your poetry with a Great photo included with your posting. Photo makes a great match. Good Luck to you in the contest and may God Bless you

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made excellent use of your seventeen syllables in this inspirational Bible-based 5-7-5, conveying one of the promises made by the Lord Himself.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2021

Great reveiw zanya