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Aiona's Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 133 "Preparing to Cast Off"
Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.

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Comment from Bonnie Seach
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If "two lines" for the contest allows one long sentence then this poem is compliant. If not then I submit It to a decision from the judges.
The presentation is attractive. Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes for the contest

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Bonnie.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Being away from home and wondering what is in the mail is something I deal with all the time, but I never did have anything interesting arriving in the post, he he he, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
    LOL! These days I don't either. :P
Comment from Jay Squires
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Clever this. Or, If it's anything like my mail now that all personal correspondence to and from is by email or text, the only thing the post office would be holding would be bills and ads.

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
    Thanks, Jay!