Funeral Farewell
Tears in Tyburn6 total reviews
Comment from Pamela Lear
A bit sad, but so very real. I find this to be an especially clever use of words, as they all have both prefixes and suffixes (with one exception, as "unkind" has no suffix. I'm glad to see that you used something other than the "ing" ending for the Tyburn! I like this!!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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A bit sad, but so very real. I find this to be an especially clever use of words, as they all have both prefixes and suffixes (with one exception, as "unkind" has no suffix. I'm glad to see that you used something other than the "ing" ending for the Tyburn! I like this!!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2021
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Thanks for your review. I like to think there are other ways to do these poems other than "ing". Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Jarvis Popovich
I recognize this kind of poem. There's a contest for this now. Really enjoyed the words, they really went well together to pair your pictures.
Such a gloomy story but realistic.
Keep up the good work!
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I recognize this kind of poem. There's a contest for this now. Really enjoyed the words, they really went well together to pair your pictures.
Such a gloomy story but realistic.
Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
Comment from E. Denison
Very good entry for the Tyburn poetry contest. You have chosen excellent words that truly support the funeral vibe from the potential perspective of the decedent, or at least what we presume that perspective could be. That mood extends to the forlorn onlookers as well. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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Very good entry for the Tyburn poetry contest. You have chosen excellent words that truly support the funeral vibe from the potential perspective of the decedent, or at least what we presume that perspective could be. That mood extends to the forlorn onlookers as well. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
Comment from Bonnie Seach
This poem fits the contest requirements. It is clever, informative and emotive. The colour scheme and accompanying picture enhance the theme. Thank you for sharing.
All the best at the booths
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This poem fits the contest requirements. It is clever, informative and emotive. The colour scheme and accompanying picture enhance the theme. Thank you for sharing.
All the best at the booths
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, the loss of a loved one does leave us in a state of gloom, your use of rhyming words is wonderful, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Excellent, the loss of a loved one does leave us in a state of gloom, your use of rhyming words is wonderful, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
Comment from Sharon Davis
This Tyburn poem meets the requirements of the format effectively.
Its subject is thought provoking and gives one pause about the traditional burial rituals.
The presentation is enhanced with the image that accompanies it.
Well done. Thanks for sharing your work.
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This Tyburn poem meets the requirements of the format effectively.
Its subject is thought provoking and gives one pause about the traditional burial rituals.
The presentation is enhanced with the image that accompanies it.
Well done. Thanks for sharing your work.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
