Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is just what the heart does, it yearns for those we love and those messages of love keep coming back to us, a fine presentation full of romance here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021

Comment from Lana Marie

Excellent

Haha, that's a really cute entry to the Haiku romance prompt. Good play on words there too on your last line! Love it. Good luck in the contest. I like your presentation!

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2021

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

Very nice romantic poem with a charming little pun. Great picture to go with it. You sound a little like a yoyo, but she has to be the best as you do keep coming back to her.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2021

Thanks for your review. It was a bit like a yo-yo at times but she is very much worth it.

reply by Carol Hillebrenner on 02-Jul-2021

Good for you.

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

Very nice romantic poem with a charming little pun. Great picture to go with it. You sound a little like a yoyo, but she has to be the best as you do keep coming back to her.

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2021

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Very punny wordplay--shorely--this witty ditty would make for a great T-shirt inscription in a beachside souvenir shop. Very clever work in a 5-7-5 Romance!

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2021

Thanks for your review. You might be onto something with that t-shirt idea.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I chuckled at the humor in your last line. You used a fun and lively approach to share the sentiment of this prompt. Well done on the choice of artwork that is a symbol we can all recognize. Good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 02-Jul-2021

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.