Eyes To See
I can not imagine how life is for the blind.4 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed reading your story. You have such a wonderful way with words and are quite adept at expressing yourself. I found this writing to be very interesting. It held my attention throughout. Your vivid descriptions made it easy for me to visualize the scenario you were writing about. Excellent job!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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I really enjoyed reading your story. You have such a wonderful way with words and are quite adept at expressing yourself. I found this writing to be very interesting. It held my attention throughout. Your vivid descriptions made it easy for me to visualize the scenario you were writing about. Excellent job!
Comment Written 11-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much for this review! It was nice to open up the site, when I haven?t been on here for a while, and read your sweet review 😊
Comment from Pamela Lear
I love this! The first part is so heartwarming, I can relate to the things you mention. And, then the second part is actually pretty funny. This was quie fun to read!!!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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I love this! The first part is so heartwarming, I can relate to the things you mention. And, then the second part is actually pretty funny. This was quie fun to read!!!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Thank You so much ! I appreciate your kind review
Comment from Pj Dennison
Your free verse poem is excellent and meets the requirements for the contest. You chose the sense of sight as the one you would not give up. I think it is very endearing that your sense of sight is focused on your family. You love them greatly. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Your free verse poem is excellent and meets the requirements for the contest. You chose the sense of sight as the one you would not give up. I think it is very endearing that your sense of sight is focused on your family. You love them greatly. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank You for reviewing my entry!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your use of many examples about not wanting to lose your sight are well expressed. I could easily understand all of them. I liked the one about the three pointer at the buzzer--had to see it to believe it. Your lines read well and create great imagery. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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You did a good job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your use of many examples about not wanting to lose your sight are well expressed. I could easily understand all of them. I liked the one about the three pointer at the buzzer--had to see it to believe it. Your lines read well and create great imagery. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank You for reviewing this and for your encouraging comments. I appreciate it.