"Extremely Horrid Tales!"
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "On the Verge of Success?"A book of my thoughts and nightmares.
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Comment from v3nd3tta
The title was captivating, the story was incredible, the writing style was unique, every word and piece of punctuation made me want to read more. If only i could write like this.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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The title was captivating, the story was incredible, the writing style was unique, every word and piece of punctuation made me want to read more. If only i could write like this.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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I would beat it first person to state I'm not a writer nor can I write well.
After doing it hundreds of thousand times we learned perfection!
And then we finally realize that yes our dreams have come true when we are writers!
Thanks for sharing and have a blessed week.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Pj Dennison
Your free verse poem featuring Mad Dr. Ricky 1024 is excellent. The Mad doctor having rage running through his veins, creates his red army and he himself goes through a metamorphosis. It's a highly creative poem of revenge. I can just see Dr. Rocky rubbing his hands together with excitement and elation. Your characterization is fantastic.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Your free verse poem featuring Mad Dr. Ricky 1024 is excellent. The Mad doctor having rage running through his veins, creates his red army and he himself goes through a metamorphosis. It's a highly creative poem of revenge. I can just see Dr. Rocky rubbing his hands together with excitement and elation. Your characterization is fantastic.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Yes I had very much decided to become the Mad Doctor that day when I was writing.
The next time I'll be made Dr Frankenstein of course!
Ricky
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Hi. Dr. Ricky, Thank you for sharing your poem. I will be looking forward to your next work. Have a great day!