Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This twelve-word poem, Silent Footsteps, has the proper word count and allows that deception and confusion often work together to make lies seem like truth.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Hi Bill? thanks so much.

Comment from Stephanie Ricketson

Excellent

Very deep and thought provoking! I appreciate not only the words, the meaning and symbolism behind them, but also the image provided... Very amazing in so few words.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Thank you so much.

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

that's good and very true.
If the position of "companion" was not intentional, you might highlight the whole poem then click the "center" symbol. It would line it up, but then you probably know that.
But I like your message!
Katharine - pome lover

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Thanks so much, Katharine!

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This is a neat statement and more poetic perhaps than one at first realises. I found the joint imagery of 'silent footsteps' and 'keeping Confusion as his constant companion' to be most compelling.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Hi Jim, thanks so much! :)

Comment from Versch

Excellent

This is an excellent 12 word poem that meets the criteria for the contest. It is very well thought of. It is assertive of the fact that deception creates confusion. I like it! Well done! Goodluck in the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Thanks so much!

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Very well written, you have described deception excellently in your few words, very well presented and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Thanks so much, Kym! :)

Comment from Brenda Henderson

Excellent

Wow. You definitely packed a punch with this thought provoking piece. The artwork pairs perfectly here. Definitely well crafted piece. Very true statements as well. Good job!

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021

Thank you so much!

reply by Brenda Henderson on 28-Jun-2021

You're Welcome!

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. I like your poetry. It's beautifully written. It's well penned. Excellent work! No mistakes. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021

Thank you Raul!!