Freedom Rings from Beyond
A message from those that were.13 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
his is a heartfelt and emotional write. I agree, they have a right and should be heard. I think it is a very good and well crafted post for the 4th of July. Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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his is a heartfelt and emotional write. I agree, they have a right and should be heard. I think it is a very good and well crafted post for the 4th of July. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank you, equestrik. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your Fourth of July poem! You're not the only one with this reminder to remember the sacrifice of our brave military who fought for freedom. I especially liked the last stanza. Best wishes in the contest!
By the way, you end with quotation marks but I don't know where any quotes started.
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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Great job with your Fourth of July poem! You're not the only one with this reminder to remember the sacrifice of our brave military who fought for freedom. I especially liked the last stanza. Best wishes in the contest!
By the way, you end with quotation marks but I don't know where any quotes started.
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank you, Helen. :) The quotation marks start when the speaker rises from the room of gloom.
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Okay, I see it now!
Comment from Versch
So very touching! The picture of the graveyard that comes with it, with all those headstones of the fallen soldiers, adds more to the emotional side of the poem. Yes, they have the right to be heard. Well done!
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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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So very touching! The picture of the graveyard that comes with it, with all those headstones of the fallen soldiers, adds more to the emotional side of the poem. Yes, they have the right to be heard. Well done!
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank you, versch. :) I'm glad you liked it.
