Sweet Talk
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Comment from Begin Again
Good Morning, Brenda
Your short 80-word flash proves it doesn't take a lot of words to make someone understand or know what "Sweet Talk" is all about. I know I would give anything to hear my husband whisper those sweet words to me again.
Good luck in the contest. It's a winner for me.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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Good Morning, Brenda
Your short 80-word flash proves it doesn't take a lot of words to make someone understand or know what "Sweet Talk" is all about. I know I would give anything to hear my husband whisper those sweet words to me again.
Good luck in the contest. It's a winner for me.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 16-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2021
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You are welcome!
Comment from Pamela Lear
What a beautiful poem, with sentiments that are so relatable. Yeah, we all need (and deserve) a little sweet talk, and I do love the way you spoke of being in His arms; it evoked a visceral reaction of both longing and comfort. I love this!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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What a beautiful poem, with sentiments that are so relatable. Yeah, we all need (and deserve) a little sweet talk, and I do love the way you spoke of being in His arms; it evoked a visceral reaction of both longing and comfort. I love this!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Comment from BeckyRae
We all could use more sweet talk. Sometimes we feel like we are taken for granted. Some sweet, loving words can make a world of difference. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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We all could use more sweet talk. Sometimes we feel like we are taken for granted. Some sweet, loving words can make a world of difference. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2021
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Comment from nomi338
Even though I do not know you, have never even beheld your no doubt beautiful face; I treasure you, I rate you to be more precious than the rarest jewel. Please allow my voice to caress you in the greatest amount of pleasure, so intense tat it makes me ache with the desire to inflame you with deep passion. Come quickly to my waiting arms as I burn for you.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2021
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Even though I do not know you, have never even beheld your no doubt beautiful face; I treasure you, I rate you to be more precious than the rarest jewel. Please allow my voice to caress you in the greatest amount of pleasure, so intense tat it makes me ache with the desire to inflame you with deep passion. Come quickly to my waiting arms as I burn for you.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2021
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Is this a review or your own contest entry? In any event; Thanks for the review but no thanks to the invitation if this indeed was meant to be one. As you can probably tell by my entry, I'm already taken and there isn't a man on earth for whom I would exchange him. I'm a one guy gal!
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Ha ha. No dear one, I was simply writing in the spirit of the poem. I am a happily married man, my wife and I have been happy together for more that 40 years. i really thought you were inviting reviews written in the same vein as the entry. I apologize for any misconceptions.
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No problem. Congratulations on your 40+ years of wedded bliss!
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Thank you.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Brenda Henderson,
Nice piece of Romance Non-Fiction as 'Flash Fiction' meeting the desired norms, having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting a RARE theme.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2021
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Hello Brenda Henderson,
Nice piece of Romance Non-Fiction as 'Flash Fiction' meeting the desired norms, having lucid as well as perfectly matching the theme phraseology, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting a RARE theme.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2021
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Thank You!
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B.H, Most Welcome!
With Best Wishes,
~ RP
Comment from equestrik
This is a good entry for the 80 word flash fiction. I think your picture choice is well done and your words ring true for man people who could use a bit of sweet talk.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2021
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This is a good entry for the 80 word flash fiction. I think your picture choice is well done and your words ring true for man people who could use a bit of sweet talk.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2021
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Yes, that 'Sweet Talk' is important in a woman's life. I know I wish my husband of 42 years would say it a little more often. LOL Thank you for sharing your contest entry with us. Good luck.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Yes, that 'Sweet Talk' is important in a woman's life. I know I wish my husband of 42 years would say it a little more often. LOL Thank you for sharing your contest entry with us. Good luck.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Comment from oliver818
Nice piece, I enjoyed reading it. It may be more of a poem than a story though. Best of luck with the competition and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Nice piece, I enjoyed reading it. It may be more of a poem than a story though. Best of luck with the competition and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Comment from JudyE
You've made excellent use of your eighty words. Mostly, when 'He' is capitalised, it's taken to mean God or Jesus but I guess here you're talking about a nearest and dearest.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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You've made excellent use of your eighty words. Mostly, when 'He' is capitalised, it's taken to mean God or Jesus but I guess here you're talking about a nearest and dearest.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Comment from Eunice Amero
Yeah sure could I. I think we all like that now and then, It was a cute piece, Keep up the good work. You did a good job. I wanted more. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Yeah sure could I. I think we all like that now and then, It was a cute piece, Keep up the good work. You did a good job. I wanted more. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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welcome
