Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Indeed His tears must have fallen at Calvary, and this pivotal sacrifice is what brings hope to all, of salvation and of eternal life. Well written with so few words.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021

Thank you so very much

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

God suffered for the sake of humanity -to save them from their sins. he cried for the suffering people,so that they may have hope. All the best for the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Thank you very much

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

What a beautiful presentation this is! This sweet child and all the emotion in the writing is captivating. It is a lovely write for the 12 word poetry contest.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021

Thank you very much

Comment from Lana Marie

Excellent

This is really good ! Great graphic. I like how the colors pop! Good use of the 12 words you chose for this poetry contest. I Hope you do well with it.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021

Thank you very much

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

My understanding of the rainbow is it's God promise that he will not ever have a great flood again. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021

Thank you very much

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

You made good use of your twelve words. A fresh perspective--clever take on reason for God's tears--excellent title choice--you made wise use of that often-overlooked space.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021

Thank you very much, the title had me worried-much appreciated