Comment from Kathleen S.

Excellent

I like your poem. It's simple, and yet it has a rather nice message. A story has begun... a romantic one... You leave the reader with wondering of what their future will be... happy times, etc. Very well done.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021

Thanks so much for your read and review. Appreciated.

Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

The poem is contest compliant. The accompanying imagery underscores the theme.
For a man, the appearance of a beautiful woman on a moonlit beach exudes romance.
Best wishes at the booths

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021

Thank you for your read and feedback. And for your good wishes.

reply by Bonnie Seach on 28-Jun-2021

👌👍🏻😊