Mystic Ladder
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Love this one Yvonne, especially like the idea of dispensing with the debris of ones made in foolish moments. I like your choice of topic for the ladder challenge, I'm afraid I had to revert to ME again. Well done with your climb,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Love this one Yvonne, especially like the idea of dispensing with the debris of ones made in foolish moments. I like your choice of topic for the ladder challenge, I'm afraid I had to revert to ME again. Well done with your climb,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Thank you. I appreciate that.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvonne.
This is an ethereal type of poem as you mix the reality of life with dreams and visions. The vision you paint is surreal but as you go through the list of thoughts and you come to the bottom of the ladder, when you put your foot on the ground, it's gone . Is an interesting concept and well written.
Robert
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Hello Yvonne.
This is an ethereal type of poem as you mix the reality of life with dreams and visions. The vision you paint is surreal but as you go through the list of thoughts and you come to the bottom of the ladder, when you put your foot on the ground, it's gone . Is an interesting concept and well written.
Robert
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Thank you, Robert.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Ben Colder
I was thinking about the ladders we all climb, and then there is the Jacob Ladder of a challenge for destyney. In one sense, we all climb those ladders some awaken to say what happened?
My blessing to you.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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I was thinking about the ladders we all climb, and then there is the Jacob Ladder of a challenge for destyney. In one sense, we all climb those ladders some awaken to say what happened?
My blessing to you.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Thank you so much, Ben.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Brilliant take on the ladder theme--stunning imagery and elegant presentation with lovely flow--intriguing ending--I guess it is meant to leave us hanging, so to speak.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Brilliant take on the ladder theme--stunning imagery and elegant presentation with lovely flow--intriguing ending--I guess it is meant to leave us hanging, so to speak.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank you. It's a mystery. lol
Comment from judiverse
This is a great take on "ladder" and I love the picture of the ladder going up into the clouds. The climb leads to the discovery of your aspirations and dreams. After sorting through, you save only the lofty ones. When you descend, the ladder disappears. That is amazing, so it has to be a magic ladder. It was great that the ladder remained stable. judi
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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This is a great take on "ladder" and I love the picture of the ladder going up into the clouds. The climb leads to the discovery of your aspirations and dreams. After sorting through, you save only the lofty ones. When you descend, the ladder disappears. That is amazing, so it has to be a magic ladder. It was great that the ladder remained stable. judi
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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Thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I owe you so many sixes, dear sister. I love this one, it really strikes a cord with me. I need to climb that ladder and sort through the debris in my head, it will leave me empty headed, but that is quite normal. I liked the touch of aliteration in the lines: cumulus cluster, and, radiant rainbow. Well done, my dear SATP. Warm hugs, and lots of love. :)) Sandra xxx
(I'm sending you an email in two minutes. :))
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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I owe you so many sixes, dear sister. I love this one, it really strikes a cord with me. I need to climb that ladder and sort through the debris in my head, it will leave me empty headed, but that is quite normal. I liked the touch of aliteration in the lines: cumulus cluster, and, radiant rainbow. Well done, my dear SATP. Warm hugs, and lots of love. :)) Sandra xxx
(I'm sending you an email in two minutes. :))
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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Thank you. I'm the same. If I decluttered my brain, the wind would whistle through from ear to ear. lol. Love and hugs right back to you.
Comment from aryr
What a beautiful picture and an amazing poem. I am so glad that your words were able to see the rainbow and your wishes. It is so important that one has belief enough to see what they see and learn what they learn. Great job, very much enjoyed.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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What a beautiful picture and an amazing poem. I am so glad that your words were able to see the rainbow and your wishes. It is so important that one has belief enough to see what they see and learn what they learn. Great job, very much enjoyed.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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Thank you.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a superb piece of poetry--full of lovely, vivd imagery. The ladder,
the clouds, and the climb are uplifting but realistic symbols about soul-searching, examining the past, and realizing the need to prioritize when we aspire. :-)
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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This is a superb piece of poetry--full of lovely, vivd imagery. The ladder,
the clouds, and the climb are uplifting but realistic symbols about soul-searching, examining the past, and realizing the need to prioritize when we aspire. :-)
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review and stars!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Our life can seem like a climb at times as we deal with the challenged of life and we look back and wonder how we got through it all, a fine free-write for the club here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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Our life can seem like a climb at times as we deal with the challenged of life and we look back and wonder how we got through it all, a fine free-write for the club here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good poem you have penned for the Ladders event. You used great descriptive words and they go so well with the art work. thank you for sharing. love and blessings Teri
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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This is a very good poem you have penned for the Ladders event. You used great descriptive words and they go so well with the art work. thank you for sharing. love and blessings Teri
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2021
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Thank you.
