Weed Them Out
12 word poem30 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a wonderful metaphor and a statement of truth. It is best to let negative things not linger. Good mix of words and artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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This is a wonderful metaphor and a statement of truth. It is best to let negative things not linger. Good mix of words and artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much.
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You're very welcome, Sanku.
Joan
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your twelve words to convey a realistic message about the harm that bitterness does to one's entire being. I agree
that it should be pulled up, roots and all. I believe this is possible only with God's help.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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You have made excellent use of your twelve words to convey a realistic message about the harm that bitterness does to one's entire being. I agree
that it should be pulled up, roots and all. I believe this is possible only with God's help.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Weed Them Out
by Sanku
Great entry for the 12 Word Poetry Contest. Good word count.
Check this....
(Bitterness,like) weeds
grows and lets grief linger.
Pull out ruinous roots.
(Space missing)
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Weed Them Out
by Sanku
Great entry for the 12 Word Poetry Contest. Good word count.
Check this....
(Bitterness,like) weeds
grows and lets grief linger.
Pull out ruinous roots.
(Space missing)
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much. thanks for pointing out the typo.
Comment from karenina
More difficult than one thinks to sculpt twelve words into a meaningful presentation. You've sent an important message here...enhanced, I think, by the well chosen image. Tough to chug along life's "tracks" when our they are choked and cluttered with weeds of discontent! Nice!
Karenina
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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More difficult than one thinks to sculpt twelve words into a meaningful presentation. You've sent an important message here...enhanced, I think, by the well chosen image. Tough to chug along life's "tracks" when our they are choked and cluttered with weeds of discontent! Nice!
Karenina
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much.
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Very very welcome...........Karenina
Comment from godlucifer
sometime we question our bitterness and for this we are startle and confuse. your poem was well created. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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sometime we question our bitterness and for this we are startle and confuse. your poem was well created. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from nomi338
Bitterness in the heart can leave a sourness in the mouth which in turn leaves a frown on the face. Thus the face you present to the world is one of ugliness and distaste. What a shame that would be.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Bitterness in the heart can leave a sourness in the mouth which in turn leaves a frown on the face. Thus the face you present to the world is one of ugliness and distaste. What a shame that would be.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Justin Chopin
Great advice. I thought, the way you were able to compare bitterness to these wicked weeds of woe that can destroy a person's soul was very clever. Your closing line was also excellent. Well done with this poem.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Great advice. I thought, the way you were able to compare bitterness to these wicked weeds of woe that can destroy a person's soul was very clever. Your closing line was also excellent. Well done with this poem.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and very well written 12 word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very neat imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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This is a very interesting and very well written 12 word poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very neat imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Thank you very much.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Weed Them Out", is a well-written, but somewhat depressing piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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"Weed Them Out", is a well-written, but somewhat depressing piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your kind review.
Dear Anon, you're very welcome.
Comment from Boogienights
You said a lot in only 12 words. I happen to agree with you on this, I think we should teach children when they're young, not to hate. Instead politicians are promoting division based on race....it's sad. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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You said a lot in only 12 words. I happen to agree with you on this, I think we should teach children when they're young, not to hate. Instead politicians are promoting division based on race....it's sad. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for the thoughtful comments.
