Accessorizing My Walk
A 5-7-5 poem5 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Jill,
This contest entry deserved to be on the podium. It is a cute idea you have penned. I have not (yet) observed my neighbors following this protocol. Of course, I don't live in a tony neighborhood. So the same rules don't apply. LOL
Mark
P.S. For future FS posts, consider raising the font size of your entries. IMHO it adds a punch to the overall presentation. Whether you decide to center the text lines or not, it is your poetic choice.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021
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Jill,
This contest entry deserved to be on the podium. It is a cute idea you have penned. I have not (yet) observed my neighbors following this protocol. Of course, I don't live in a tony neighborhood. So the same rules don't apply. LOL
Mark
P.S. For future FS posts, consider raising the font size of your entries. IMHO it adds a punch to the overall presentation. Whether you decide to center the text lines or not, it is your poetic choice.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021
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Thanks, Mark, for your review. I appreciate your comments. In my neighborhood, some of us clean up after our dogs and some do not. Thank you also for the font advice. I agree that the larger font usually works better.
Jill
Comment from VJWild
This literally made me laugh out loud and the picture is so perfect!! Carrying those bags does indeed suck which is probably why I have cats! Nice piece! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2021
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This literally made me laugh out loud and the picture is so perfect!! Carrying those bags does indeed suck which is probably why I have cats! Nice piece! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review and stars. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from LisaMay
Haha... I know what you mean. It's good to see that you conscientiously pick up after your dog. Your poem highlights why so many people choose to fling the bag of dog poop into the nearest bushes. If only it matched their shoes!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2021
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Haha... I know what you mean. It's good to see that you conscientiously pick up after your dog. Your poem highlights why so many people choose to fling the bag of dog poop into the nearest bushes. If only it matched their shoes!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2021
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Thanks for your review. Cleaning up after a dog can be a chore but it's the having to walk around with the bag that gets me! I appreciate your comments.
Comment from L. Kalere
OMG this is so bad it's good. Your kireji is as brilliant as the rest is gross. There's going to be stiff competition in this contest. Seems there's no end to disgusting things. Best of luck.
Linda
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2021
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OMG this is so bad it's good. Your kireji is as brilliant as the rest is gross. There's going to be stiff competition in this contest. Seems there's no end to disgusting things. Best of luck.
Linda
Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2021
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Thanks Linda. This is such an amusing competition. I'll keep my fingers crossed for the contest!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I laughed out loud a this picture and poem. It's a duty I also have and my granddaughter thinks I should have bought a rainbow of colors instead of just blue. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2021
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I laughed out loud a this picture and poem. It's a duty I also have and my granddaughter thinks I should have bought a rainbow of colors instead of just blue. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review! The rainbow of colors would be more fun., I'm sure.
