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undeterred

a 5 7 5 dog poem.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Cat Merto
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Nicely worded 5-7-5 poem
About your dog looking for a treat if not in your hand may be your feet
Very funny
Nice photo as well
Goes great with poem
Good luck in contest

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2021
    Haha true story, they figured might just be something fallen around my feet, bless. Thanks for the review, cheers, j
reply by Cat Merto on 26-Jun-2021
    Your welcome
Comment from LisaMay
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I started laughing as soon as I saw that little guy too - so eager and bouncy. Your poem depicts how any dog owner will know their pet's insatiable quest for a treat - and their disbelief at its non-appearance. if not in the owner's hand, then surely it must be somewhere.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
    Exactly, haha, little beggars. Thanks for the insightful review, cheers, j
reply by LisaMay on 24-Jun-2021
    :)