A glimpse of my journey
Search And Rescue3 total reviews
Comment from pharp
Mystery Poet,
Thanks so most for sharing your journey and your decision to walk with the Lord.
So many of us have made poor decisions throughout our lives; I know that I have.
Your faith shines through in this compelling poem of your journey.
This has been a powerful and moving read. I wish you the very best in the contest; thanks for sharing, and may God continue to keep you in His loving care.
Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.
In the third stanza and the sixth stanza, did you intend for your lines to three lines?
Blessings...Portia
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2021
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Mystery Poet,
Thanks so most for sharing your journey and your decision to walk with the Lord.
So many of us have made poor decisions throughout our lives; I know that I have.
Your faith shines through in this compelling poem of your journey.
This has been a powerful and moving read. I wish you the very best in the contest; thanks for sharing, and may God continue to keep you in His loving care.
Have a wonderful and blessed weekend.
In the third stanza and the sixth stanza, did you intend for your lines to three lines?
Blessings...Portia
Comment Written 25-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for your review!
I really didn?t have any
Particular rhyming scheme when I wrote it. Thank you for your comments as I tried to restructure some of the lines so it could flow little bit better. The challenge that I had and putting this together was to convey everything I wanted to express in a good syllable format. So I went for the ?anything goes as it long as it rhymes at the end ? LOL
Comment from Eunice Amero
wow You got saved around the time I did. I was 19 some 30 or more years. It's always a blessing to meet other Christians. What a day that will be when our Jesus we shall see. You did a lovely job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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wow You got saved around the time I did. I was 19 some 30 or more years. It's always a blessing to meet other Christians. What a day that will be when our Jesus we shall see. You did a lovely job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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Awesome, thank you for reading, reviewing and sharing our kindred hearts!
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you are welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful write full of long term belief and devotion and I enjoyed the journey here, you have felt supported and often rescued by your faith, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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A faithful write full of long term belief and devotion and I enjoyed the journey here, you have felt supported and often rescued by your faith, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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Thank You Dolly
