The Garden Love Grew
She spends her time in...14 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
She spends her time in...
The Garden Love Grew
Boogienights,
your free verse is beautiful telling us that the lady caring for the flower and vegetable garden
I like you image of a woman caring for garden
Gert
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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She spends her time in...
The Garden Love Grew
Boogienights,
your free verse is beautiful telling us that the lady caring for the flower and vegetable garden
I like you image of a woman caring for garden
Gert
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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Thank you, that's so nice of you. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from Susan Newell
This is somewhat of a melancholy, but soft and warm poem. It is nice to know that by tending the garden and watching life fulfill itself, she is able to keep a part of her husband alive and with her. A pleasure to read; nice rhyming.
You have a grammar problem with this line:
the rain, it helps her garden to sustain.
The comma and "it" are extraneous. I think it's easily remedied by changing to "the rain will help"
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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This is somewhat of a melancholy, but soft and warm poem. It is nice to know that by tending the garden and watching life fulfill itself, she is able to keep a part of her husband alive and with her. A pleasure to read; nice rhyming.
You have a grammar problem with this line:
the rain, it helps her garden to sustain.
The comma and "it" are extraneous. I think it's easily remedied by changing to "the rain will help"
Comment Written 24-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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Thank you for this nice review and for the correction. It's very appreciated. :)
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You are welcome. It's a very nice poem.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
Goodness!
You have written my biography - albeit my beloved husband is still very much alive.
You have captured the joy of gardening = what I, too, love to do, and in fact, am recovering this evening from a day well spent doing just that!
If I may, one nit:
Rows of potatoes, cabbage, pees, (peas) and corn.
Best Wishes!
diane
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reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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Hello Mystery Writer!
Goodness!
You have written my biography - albeit my beloved husband is still very much alive.
You have captured the joy of gardening = what I, too, love to do, and in fact, am recovering this evening from a day well spent doing just that!
If I may, one nit:
Rows of potatoes, cabbage, pees, (peas) and corn.
Best Wishes!
diane
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2021
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Noooo...pee? What was I thinking? Not a good addition to the garden. Thanks so much for this wonderful review and for the correction, it's really appreciated. :)
Comment from RodG
I really like this poem about a widow who continues to work in her garden as she grows old. You describe the garden nicely as it prospers from the rain and create sympathy for the woman. You also use the required words seamlessly. Rod
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
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I really like this poem about a widow who continues to work in her garden as she grows old. You describe the garden nicely as it prospers from the rain and create sympathy for the woman. You also use the required words seamlessly. Rod
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for this great review. :)
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My pleasure.
