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The ''Pampered'' Baby Caper

Electrical tape gives parents quite a shock

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Comment from LisaMay
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So much for the baby being pampered with 2 attendants - pity they were so inexperienced and wasted all the diapers. It makes for a guffaw of a story though. (I've never seen finagle used in 2 stories in quick succession before - such an odd word. I know what it means but it's not part of my own vocabulary.)

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
    The gist is true--I don't think they wasted the diapers.

    I realized I used finagle in my first story--thought it would be acceptable to repeat in separate stories!
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Another Liz original told with the usual twist. You are able to find the amusing and the original in everyday occurrences. This one made me smile. Good job.

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021
    The gist is true--I don't think they wasted the diapers. Nice to see you!