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A brief discourse on marriage.

2 total reviews 
Comment from kahpot
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What a beautiful sonnet, feelings of the heart do not need paperwork, a piece of paper does not have the strength to join people, an excellent read, if I may the last line of your second stanza " The they..." I think a typo has been left here, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2021

Comment from pharp
This work has reached the exceptional level

Mystery Poet,

You did an excellent job in the penning of this beautiful sonnet.
Excellent rhyming throughout with a very smooth flow.

You are right about June; I got married on June 1st. Thanks for sharing a most enjoyable read; the very best to you in the contest.

There's a typo in the second stanza - last line - first word.


 Comment Written 21-Jun-2021