Comment from
Theodore McDowell
I love this as the lyric for a song. It works much better as a lyric than a short poem, and it is very provocative. Yes she may kill you, lol. Well done. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
Hello Theodore: I thank you for your review. You are appreciated. You have a very good understanding of where I'm coming from with this posting. God bless you, my friend. cordially: rhonnie69.