My Path
2-4-2 poem12 total reviews
Comment from Senyai
Hi Sanku,
My, is this a poignant poem with such clear emotion in just three lines. I love the "unclutter" of these short poems. This form can let the reader have so much imagination play in the few words given. It becomes their own more personally in a way than if there is more said or explained.
This is an original take on the strongest of bonds between two people. Lovely! A great contest entry.
Senyai
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
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Hi Sanku,
My, is this a poignant poem with such clear emotion in just three lines. I love the "unclutter" of these short poems. This form can let the reader have so much imagination play in the few words given. It becomes their own more personally in a way than if there is more said or explained.
This is an original take on the strongest of bonds between two people. Lovely! A great contest entry.
Senyai
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much .I loved your comments .
Comment from royowen
It's a good feeling to reach one's destination is a relief, but to know that one has made it without too much wrong, to be with a loved one is lovely, well done, beautifully written 2/4/2, good luck, blessings Roy,
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
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It's a good feeling to reach one's destination is a relief, but to know that one has made it without too much wrong, to be with a loved one is lovely, well done, beautifully written 2/4/2, good luck, blessings Roy,
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much.
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