Mr. Bones
Help Mr. Bones look sharp for his date!12 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I like it! The poem is fun to read aloud with the onomatopoeia and rhymes which kids love. And today's kids are used to being interactive so asking them to draw in the bowtie is a perfect idea!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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I like it! The poem is fun to read aloud with the onomatopoeia and rhymes which kids love. And today's kids are used to being interactive so asking them to draw in the bowtie is a perfect idea!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2021
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Thanks so much for the lovely review! It was a fun one to write and was so happy you enjoyed... Have a wonderful day!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem for a child, Mr. Bones, is a cute party game that would certainly fit right in at a children's Halloween get-together. Maybe even adults would give it a try.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021
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This poem for a child, Mr. Bones, is a cute party game that would certainly fit right in at a children's Halloween get-together. Maybe even adults would give it a try.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021
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Hi, Bill! Thanks so much for the wonderful review! I wanted to put together something interactive for smaller children and I am so happy that you thought it worked well. Thanks again and have a great day!
Comment from Patty Palmer
A cute game it could make for a party game. It could be adapted to any kind of party theme. A birthday party it could pin the flame on the candle or even pin the candle on the cake. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021
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A cute game it could make for a party game. It could be adapted to any kind of party theme. A birthday party it could pin the flame on the candle or even pin the candle on the cake. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2021
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Thanks for the wonderful review and your great ideas! It was fun to write and I am so happy you enjoyed. Thank you again and enjoy your day!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a fun poem, Mystery Author. The image is perfect as well as your repeated lines. There's a good beat to your words, the rhymes work well, and I can see young kids enjoying the game as you described in your notes. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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What a fun poem, Mystery Author. The image is perfect as well as your repeated lines. There's a good beat to your words, the rhymes work well, and I can see young kids enjoying the game as you described in your notes. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for the lovely review and am so happy that you enjoyed! It was fun to write and I am so pleased it seemed to come out as I wanted. Thanks again and have a beautiful weekend!
Comment from royowen
Well done with this excellent entry in this children's poetry contest. The idea is good, what child doesn't like Halloween. Beautifully written as an entry, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Well done with this excellent entry in this children's poetry contest. The idea is good, what child doesn't like Halloween. Beautifully written as an entry, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much, Roy, for the wonderful review! I had fun writing this one for the little ones and am so glad that you enjoyed. Thank you again and have a wonderful weekend!
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Well done
Comment from equestrik
This is really cute! What a fun halloween game and a fun poem to go with the game. This is a clever presentation with the picture as well. This is a wonderful entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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This is really cute! What a fun halloween game and a fun poem to go with the game. This is a clever presentation with the picture as well. This is a wonderful entry for the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for the lovely review! I did have fun writing it and hoped it would be a good interactive game for the younger ones. Thanks again for the wonderful review! Have a super weekend!
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed reading this piece. It was very interesting and intriguing. I felt drawn into the situation being described. Your words painted such a vivid picture in my mind. Great writing!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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I really enjoyed reading this piece. It was very interesting and intriguing. I felt drawn into the situation being described. Your words painted such a vivid picture in my mind. Great writing!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for your wonderful review! It was a fun poem to write and I'm so happy you enjoyed! Have a great weekend!
Comment from Wendy G
A very creative idea, and it would make an excellent book for children. The bow tie could be printed onto the last page of the book, and be able to be coloured in first, then cut out and attached. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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A very creative idea, and it would make an excellent book for children. The bow tie could be printed onto the last page of the book, and be able to be coloured in first, then cut out and attached. Well done. Best wishes for your entry.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Hi, Wendy! Thanks so much for the lovely review and the great suggestions. I'm so happy you enjoyed Mr. Bones! Thanks again and have a beautiful weekend!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an interesting idea to add what Mr. Bones forgot. Your vocabulary is fairly easy for young children to read with a little help. And the repetitious lines have sounds children will like to repeat. Picture is also a friendly-looking character.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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This is an interesting idea to add what Mr. Bones forgot. Your vocabulary is fairly easy for young children to read with a little help. And the repetitious lines have sounds children will like to repeat. Picture is also a friendly-looking character.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for your lovely review! Exactly what I was trying to go for... something little children could enjoy that was fun and interactive! Thanks again and have a wonderful weekend!
Comment from blondie560
Very cute! I like your idea of the Halloween party game as well. You could have a female one and pin the bow on her head/hair.
It seems like it would be a good handout for small children to color and decorate the bow too. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Very cute! I like your idea of the Halloween party game as well. You could have a female one and pin the bow on her head/hair.
It seems like it would be a good handout for small children to color and decorate the bow too. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for the lovely review and I definitely like your suggestion for a girl skeleton with a hair bow! So glad you enjoyed! Thanks again and have a great weekend!
