Comment from Bonnie Seach

Excellent

Correct syllable count. Ominous artwork to support the theme. The idea is original and emotive.
Thanks for sharing. May you have success. Best wishes

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021

Thanks for your kind words and support fir my contest entry. Your stars light up my feeling for your review.

reply by Bonnie Seach on 19-Jun-2021

reply by Bonnie Seach on 19-Jun-2021

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your words plus great image pair perfectly, Mystery Author, to tell this true story of summer thunderstorms. I enjoyed reading and reviewing your contest entry. Great job with the syllable count per line, the beautiful picture, the smooth flow, and the descriptive word choices like white daggers. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2021

Jan,

Thanks for your review and support for this contest entry. I had an idea to change darkened to hellush and then my last lind would have been Dante?s Inferno. That version did not have the same nature feel LOL