Cyclone Tracy
Windy Acrostic6 total reviews
Comment from writer723
I really enjoyed reading this piece. It was very interesting and intriguing. I felt drawn into the situation being described. Your words painted such a vivid picture in my mind. Great writing!
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I really enjoyed reading this piece. It was very interesting and intriguing. I felt drawn into the situation being described. Your words painted such a vivid picture in my mind. Great writing!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
Yes i remember, I was driving home from Wollongong in NSW, my wife's home town, she had departed for Germany on a scholarship to the Goethe institute in Gotingen in Germany that year, it was very devastating. Beautifully written acrostic poem, well done, good entry, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Yes i remember, I was driving home from Wollongong in NSW, my wife's home town, she had departed for Germany on a scholarship to the Goethe institute in Gotingen in Germany that year, it was very devastating. Beautifully written acrostic poem, well done, good entry, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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I was only 5yo at the time so memory's a little hazy. Thankfully Darwin seems to have recovered.
Comment from equestrik
This is a great presetation for the 'Natures Breath' writing contest. Your write is paired well with your writing and the devestation is well stated. What a tragic storm.
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This is a great presetation for the 'Natures Breath' writing contest. Your write is paired well with your writing and the devestation is well stated. What a tragic storm.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your fresh approach to this contest, Mystery Author. Your acrostic is in good form. I like the bold first letter of each line, the use of good rhymes, and the color scheme and image. Best wishes.
May I suggest
. . . .blew ( in )
. . . ( crumbled ) houses
. . . overnight her ( power )
I know your work, your choice.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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I enjoyed your fresh approach to this contest, Mystery Author. Your acrostic is in good form. I like the bold first letter of each line, the use of good rhymes, and the color scheme and image. Best wishes.
May I suggest
. . . .blew ( in )
. . . ( crumbled ) houses
. . . overnight her ( power )
I know your work, your choice.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Thanks very much for your review.
Comment from blondie560
I'm not a poetry fan, but this was really good. The rhyming was good, it flowed nicely and it told a story that I didn't know, but now I do. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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I'm not a poetry fan, but this was really good. The rhyming was good, it flowed nicely and it told a story that I didn't know, but now I do. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Gloria ....
Great job with your acrostic poem. I didn't know about Cyclone Tracy before but your write is so clear it's easy to remember.
A fine entry into this contest, and I wish you much luck with the voters.
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Great job with your acrostic poem. I didn't know about Cyclone Tracy before but your write is so clear it's easy to remember.
A fine entry into this contest, and I wish you much luck with the voters.
Gloria
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.