Snow Day
Great fun when schools are closed by a winter storm.2 total reviews
Comment from Cat Merto
Nice photo, nice poem although it was hard to understand the Trinet
Line format
But this is a new writing prompt for me
All in all the kids enjoyed a snow day with snow balls and hot cocoa
Good day when I was young
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Nice photo, nice poem although it was hard to understand the Trinet
Line format
But this is a new writing prompt for me
All in all the kids enjoyed a snow day with snow balls and hot cocoa
Good day when I was young
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and respond. What do you think is needed to make this effort worthy of five stars?
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Your welcome
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This is a sweet poem, incorporating the specifications of the Trinet format as well as reminders of many key aspects of snow days that children love.
One error:
snow angles,
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snow angels,
You found a great picture to go with your poem!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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This is a sweet poem, incorporating the specifications of the Trinet format as well as reminders of many key aspects of snow days that children love.
One error:
snow angles,
-->
snow angels,
You found a great picture to go with your poem!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Thanks for the catch. Appreciate your time to read and respond.
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You're very welcome. I hope you do well in the contest. May God bless you. - Mary Kay
