The Sparrow
a contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a nice poem about the sparrow and how it shows God's love and all the wonders that he bestows on all of us. They are such tiny birds. Your poem reads easily and the rhyme and rhythm are great. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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This is a nice poem about the sparrow and how it shows God's love and all the wonders that he bestows on all of us. They are such tiny birds. Your poem reads easily and the rhyme and rhythm are great. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review, comments, and best wishes.
Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Gert sherwood
pharp
Your contest entry The Sparrow
In every way is beautiful of how you described the little.
I smiled when I read how they love to bathe
We have a bird bath the sparrows love to frolic in their bath as they flutter their wings.
Best to you in the contest
Gert
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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pharp
Your contest entry The Sparrow
In every way is beautiful of how you described the little.
I smiled when I read how they love to bathe
We have a bird bath the sparrows love to frolic in their bath as they flutter their wings.
Best to you in the contest
Gert
Comment Written 17-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Gert,
Thanks so much for your review and best wishes.
Blessings...
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Hello, Portia.
I read your beautiful poem and I was stirred, by your bible verses too.
Your poem has beautiful imagery and your photo is a good complement to your work. I like Luke 6.
Thank you for the inspiration, Portia. Have a nice week.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Cindy
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Hello, Portia.
I read your beautiful poem and I was stirred, by your bible verses too.
Your poem has beautiful imagery and your photo is a good complement to your work. I like Luke 6.
Thank you for the inspiration, Portia. Have a nice week.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Cindy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Cindy,
Thanks so much for this great review; you have made my day.
Thanks for the best wishes, you have a nice week as well.
Hugs...
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Isn't it kind of funny that we all have certain birds that really appeal to us? Strange, but wonderful. I certainly think most of us appreciate and adore most every bird (except crows! YUCK YUCK!) but for some reason, individual types just speak to us - or should I say sing? hahahaha This was a lovely ode to the sparrow. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Isn't it kind of funny that we all have certain birds that really appeal to us? Strange, but wonderful. I certainly think most of us appreciate and adore most every bird (except crows! YUCK YUCK!) but for some reason, individual types just speak to us - or should I say sing? hahahaha This was a lovely ode to the sparrow. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Thanks for your review and comments.
Blessings...
Comment from RodG
I, too, love to watch sparrows congregate at my feeder. They are small and "competent" as the Speaker in your poem says, and certainly worthy of God's blessing. Rod
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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I, too, love to watch sparrows congregate at my feeder. They are small and "competent" as the Speaker in your poem says, and certainly worthy of God's blessing. Rod
Comment Written 16-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2021
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Thanks for your review and comments.
Blessings...
