Running Blind
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Running Blind ~ Chapter Six"The Blind Girl's toughest cold case.
29 total reviews
Comment from Janetsue
Dear Sally, I have been trying hard to get caught up with some of the postings received when I was off site for such a long time. (I am still having soreness in my knee when I sit at the computer for too long and am just starting to be able to do a little more.) In any event, I have saved you for my final person because I wanted to go back and catch all the chapters I missed in your Running Blind book. My goal is to read two or three of them each day until I get current. Your stories are always top notch.
I like that Lieutenant Harris had a premonition and it bore out. I think that is an important trait for a really good law enforcement person to have. These are my favorite lines in this particular chapter.....We found a little clothing shop and were transformed to take our place for this evening's impromptu art event downtown.
It reminded me a little bit of when I ran an assistance program for the homeless who wanted to get jobs. I had the needed funding to take them to the Good Will, Salvation Army, or other recycled clothing places to purchase clothes suitable to wear on an interview. At one time I actually helped manage a thrift store, and theatrical people would some times come in looking for vintage clothing. Smiles, Janet
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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Dear Sally, I have been trying hard to get caught up with some of the postings received when I was off site for such a long time. (I am still having soreness in my knee when I sit at the computer for too long and am just starting to be able to do a little more.) In any event, I have saved you for my final person because I wanted to go back and catch all the chapters I missed in your Running Blind book. My goal is to read two or three of them each day until I get current. Your stories are always top notch.
I like that Lieutenant Harris had a premonition and it bore out. I think that is an important trait for a really good law enforcement person to have. These are my favorite lines in this particular chapter.....We found a little clothing shop and were transformed to take our place for this evening's impromptu art event downtown.
It reminded me a little bit of when I ran an assistance program for the homeless who wanted to get jobs. I had the needed funding to take them to the Good Will, Salvation Army, or other recycled clothing places to purchase clothes suitable to wear on an interview. At one time I actually helped manage a thrift store, and theatrical people would some times come in looking for vintage clothing. Smiles, Janet
Comment Written 20-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2021
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I?m so glad you are catching up. Thank you so much. It?s always so good to see you, dear Janet. Sending you my best today and love and blessings always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from WalkerMan
A lot of exciting action occurs in this well-written chapter.
In Section One, after wrapping up analysis of articles once owned by long-time missing Camille Jean-Baptiste, we learn that Suzy has noticed that Olivia Henry looks just like the composite of what she may look like today. The case could be closed happily if both King and Samson recognize her scent.
In section Two, Sergeant Dina Ray spots the stolen car, but it speeds off, plunges into Vermilion River, and is swept downstream. Seeing one man slumped over the steering wheel and another crawling out the passenger-side window, and realizing help will arrive too late, she courageously leaps into the water in a lifesaving effort (the result of which won't be revealed until the next chapter).
Section Three is a good description of New Orleans on a summer's night.
Section Four brings us to the auction of Andre's floral painting, which sells for far more than expected (which is not uncommon in auctions of work by a popular deceased artist). The question left for the reader to ponder is whether the "gentleman in the back" is simply a wealthy art collector or the villain impersonating such a person, deceased at his hands, whose money he is spending.
I like your mother's expression, "wearing a concrete overcoat" (which avoids the "cement overshoes" cliche).
Superb, and aptly illustrated by the saxophone.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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A lot of exciting action occurs in this well-written chapter.
In Section One, after wrapping up analysis of articles once owned by long-time missing Camille Jean-Baptiste, we learn that Suzy has noticed that Olivia Henry looks just like the composite of what she may look like today. The case could be closed happily if both King and Samson recognize her scent.
In section Two, Sergeant Dina Ray spots the stolen car, but it speeds off, plunges into Vermilion River, and is swept downstream. Seeing one man slumped over the steering wheel and another crawling out the passenger-side window, and realizing help will arrive too late, she courageously leaps into the water in a lifesaving effort (the result of which won't be revealed until the next chapter).
Section Three is a good description of New Orleans on a summer's night.
Section Four brings us to the auction of Andre's floral painting, which sells for far more than expected (which is not uncommon in auctions of work by a popular deceased artist). The question left for the reader to ponder is whether the "gentleman in the back" is simply a wealthy art collector or the villain impersonating such a person, deceased at his hands, whose money he is spending.
I like your mother's expression, "wearing a concrete overcoat" (which avoids the "cement overshoes" cliche).
Superb, and aptly illustrated by the saxophone.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review of my book chapter. A lot has happened and I?m delighted to see you catching up quickly. I appreciate the the outstanding rating and generous stars. As usual, you didn?t miss a thing as far as the plot goes. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
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You are most welcome, Sal. Yes, I'm working to catch up, in part just to read what happens next (in proper order). :)) Your way of keeping multiple threads going simultaneously is actually true-to-life as well as a way to maintain overlapping suspense. All your readers love that. -- Mike
Comment from Bill Schott
Wow! So many things going on I am thrilled to read on to find out about the Sgt. Ray's swim, who bought the painting, the meet up with Olivia, etc. Fun reading.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Wow! So many things going on I am thrilled to read on to find out about the Sgt. Ray's swim, who bought the painting, the meet up with Olivia, etc. Fun reading.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2021
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Wow!! I'm so very honored and blessed, Bill. Thanks so much! I'm delighted by this and highlight to my week. I've been really sick and it's been hard to write feeling so lousy. Thank you, again. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from poetwatch
A good way to end an auction, Sally, with a cool Three million dollars. :) Cha-Ching. But, I want to know about the killer in the fancy strip suit and where did he come from? Olivia what about her? Questions, questions, questions that is how you leave me. :) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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A good way to end an auction, Sally, with a cool Three million dollars. :) Cha-Ching. But, I want to know about the killer in the fancy strip suit and where did he come from? Olivia what about her? Questions, questions, questions that is how you leave me. :) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Patience, patience, patience, dear poet. ;)) Thanks for getting me to all time best before the end of month. Whew! But most of all, thanks so much for staying with me. So glad you like. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs?
Comment from Cindy Warren
They're getting close. Maybe Olivia does remember and chooses not to say anything. Amnesia isn't usually permanent. Maybe she wants to keep whatever sent her into that hospital secret. And the guy slumped over the steering wheel, is he dead? Can't wait to find out.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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They're getting close. Maybe Olivia does remember and chooses not to say anything. Amnesia isn't usually permanent. Maybe she wants to keep whatever sent her into that hospital secret. And the guy slumped over the steering wheel, is he dead? Can't wait to find out.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Thank you for the for the great review and generous comments. Both are so appreciated. Blessings always,
Sal XOs?
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Excellent crime drama story. It is an interesting concept, a blind police detective. It would definitely make an interesting crime drama series for television, cable or streaming. Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Excellent crime drama story. It is an interesting concept, a blind police detective. It would definitely make an interesting crime drama series for television, cable or streaming. Well done!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Thank you for joining in, dear Brenda. I really appreciate the lovely review and kind compliments. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs?
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Thanks Sally!
Comment from ShirleyT1
Your chapter is wonderfully written, and has me totally hooked. I'm looking forward to reading the earlier chapters and following your story. I love your characters and great dialogue.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Your chapter is wonderfully written, and has me totally hooked. I'm looking forward to reading the earlier chapters and following your story. I love your characters and great dialogue.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and excellent rating, dear Shirley. I?m so blessed to have have you near. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs?
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sally, here goes my last six, and I'm so pleased that it goes to this chapter. So much is happening and it is written with a great pace. The imagery is wonderful and the dialogue is spot on. This chapter is very well written. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Hi Sally, here goes my last six, and I'm so pleased that it goes to this chapter. So much is happening and it is written with a great pace. The imagery is wonderful and the dialogue is spot on. This chapter is very well written. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 28-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous six stars, dear Ulla. I?m delighted that you enjoyed this chapter and are staying with me in this book. Sending you my best and blessings always,
Sal XOs?.
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a good chapter, filled with lots of action, Sally. Great dialogue and imagery, and you've left us with a question, "who is the man in the dark suit who paid so much for the painting?" I'll tune in next week to find out. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021
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This is a good chapter, filled with lots of action, Sally. Great dialogue and imagery, and you've left us with a question, "who is the man in the dark suit who paid so much for the painting?" I'll tune in next week to find out. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind attention to my work, dear Jjdy. Blessings always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from LovnPeace
Wow reading this takes me back. It is though I haven't been gone at all. As always I very much enjoyed reading your fine writing my friend. Happy to see the continuation of this enjoyable tale, I hope all is well in your world.
Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021
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Wow reading this takes me back. It is though I haven't been gone at all. As always I very much enjoyed reading your fine writing my friend. Happy to see the continuation of this enjoyable tale, I hope all is well in your world.
Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 28-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2021
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Honestly, I thought you had passed away, dear Barbara. In our last communication, you said you didn?t think you?d make it through the night and then you were gone until today. I?m more relieved than anything. I?m so glad to see you and read this. Thanks for checking back with me. We miss you honest writing around here these days. Look forward to reading you. Blessings always,
Sal XOs?
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I almost did die Sally. It has been a rough time. I came back once, but I guess you didn't see me. So sorry. My laptop doesn't type well, but I need to write again sometimes. so onward I go LOL.
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l'm glad you're back. I re-fanned you today. I will catch up with you soon dear.
Sal XOs...
