"The Gift of Life."
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Comment from Tpa
A terrific poem and how true it is. Nothing could be as strong as He. Each stanza was so richly and fulfilling written. I especially liked powerful than an earthquake. I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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A terrific poem and how true it is. Nothing could be as strong as He. Each stanza was so richly and fulfilling written. I especially liked powerful than an earthquake. I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Sometimes I can release one that rocks my world even if not quite an earthquake but amazes even me!
Thanks Tpa for your time and thoughts.
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Comment from Lana Marie
What a great uplifting description of our creator in every segment.
You get that feel of
indestructible strength power and victory reading and knowing who you describe! He is worthy to be on our knees for. Also thank you for your author notes it was fun reading the history behind the interchangeable "me and I"
Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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What a great uplifting description of our creator in every segment.
You get that feel of
indestructible strength power and victory reading and knowing who you describe! He is worthy to be on our knees for. Also thank you for your author notes it was fun reading the history behind the interchangeable "me and I"
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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I think you Lana and you honor me with this review and the wonderful six stars!
I will have to review one of your pieces and return the favor!
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"
Comment from Ric Myworld
I like you said you are learning to write. Because, truthfully, we all are only learning to write. We learn every day and improve, if we let ourselves. It's a never ending process. I'm learning too. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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I like you said you are learning to write. Because, truthfully, we all are only learning to write. We learn every day and improve, if we let ourselves. It's a never ending process. I'm learning too. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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My thanks Rick for your comments when it comes to our writing abilities here on Fanstory.
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Comment from Theodora Hamelin
I am out of my depth with regard to the grammatical use of 'me' in this poetic post, but I have awarded five stars for its conviction and the beautiful photo that accompanied it.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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I am out of my depth with regard to the grammatical use of 'me' in this poetic post, but I have awarded five stars for its conviction and the beautiful photo that accompanied it.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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I thank you very much Theodora and sometimes I too go so deep in a little far from me.
To believe and have a blessed week.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Theodore McDowell
like the phrase whom am me. It is intriguing. It is a poem of resilience, faith and overcoming adversity. Well done, would have liked some personal details in the story rather than general statements, but nothing to change at this point
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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like the phrase whom am me. It is intriguing. It is a poem of resilience, faith and overcoming adversity. Well done, would have liked some personal details in the story rather than general statements, but nothing to change at this point
Comment Written 14-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Thank you again for your second review on my work I am honored truly!
Doctor Ricky 1024