vagabond life
a bio poem2 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your beautiful, vividly descriptive, entertaining poem skillfully conveys a message about a life of excitement and adventure. I can only imagine the things you did and saw!
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
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Your beautiful, vividly descriptive, entertaining poem skillfully conveys a message about a life of excitement and adventure. I can only imagine the things you did and saw!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
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A fraction, haha. I have had the time to reflect this past year and I am happy with the life I lived, not for everyone I know. Cheers, thanks for the review
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Love the details in this poem that bring the emotions to life, "dipped my toe in Mexico," really nice. Would like the same details to back up the phrase, the light left on at home for me. I don't get the same personal feel from that one phrase. Beside that picky comment, very well done.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
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Love the details in this poem that bring the emotions to life, "dipped my toe in Mexico," really nice. Would like the same details to back up the phrase, the light left on at home for me. I don't get the same personal feel from that one phrase. Beside that picky comment, very well done.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021
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Thanks for the review and welcome to fanstory. The light left on was a nod to my mom and her encouragement for my unusual life, cheers, j