The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 116 "What now?"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
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Comment from HarryT
You capture well the feeling of those who wish to travel during this pandemic. The font used is too close together makes reading somewhat difficult. I suggest double spacing or a different font. Some mistakes need correction - dancing on (to) Coronella's tunes. (F)february. break loss should be break loose. Did you mean Heil freaking Mary? "Will my receipt from the pharmacy (will delete) be enough as proof of the jabs?
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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You capture well the feeling of those who wish to travel during this pandemic. The font used is too close together makes reading somewhat difficult. I suggest double spacing or a different font. Some mistakes need correction - dancing on (to) Coronella's tunes. (F)february. break loss should be break loose. Did you mean Heil freaking Mary? "Will my receipt from the pharmacy (will delete) be enough as proof of the jabs?
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your honesty and great review:)
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You are welcome.
Comment from lancellot
Very interesting. I see different places still have different standards.
Notes
There are some run on sentences and some editing needed.
Today [I] almost got a heart attack{.}
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KLM {send}me a message that my flight was cancelled.
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Original flight booked in {february}
-February
because my vaccine are done in pharmacies,
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because my vaccines were done in pharmacies
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Very interesting. I see different places still have different standards.
Notes
There are some run on sentences and some editing needed.
Today [I] almost got a heart attack{.}
- add
- change
KLM {send}me a message that my flight was cancelled.
- sent
Original flight booked in {february}
-February
because my vaccine are done in pharmacies,
-change
because my vaccines were done in pharmacies
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you kindly for your grammar corrections and the wonderful review.
Comment from lyenochka
I think it will all work out. Don't worry. These are just annoying things that comes with planning. We should plan but remain flexible. Will pray that your boss will be understanding. As the Yiddish saying goes: Man plans; God laughs.
booked in february: (February)
returned flight from August 31st. to
(two changes: return flight from August 31st to)
no guaranties that (guarantees) the other is an older spelling
Heil freaking Marry! (Hail freaking Mary) I'm guessing.
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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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I think it will all work out. Don't worry. These are just annoying things that comes with planning. We should plan but remain flexible. Will pray that your boss will be understanding. As the Yiddish saying goes: Man plans; God laughs.
booked in february: (February)
returned flight from August 31st. to
(two changes: return flight from August 31st to)
no guaranties that (guarantees) the other is an older spelling
Heil freaking Marry! (Hail freaking Mary) I'm guessing.
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Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you so much my dear friend for your constant support.
