Comment from RodG

Excellent

I like the metaphor chosen for this shortie--the stars being a night light. Where I live, that is unlikely because of the bright city lights just twenty miles away that cause the stars to fade. Rod

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021

Hi Rod . Thank you for your review and nothing like a gorgeous night sky We have some lovely ones here
Cheers Chris

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-You have a good
topic, effective imagery,
and rhyme.
-The syllable count is good, too.
-I like the play on words
with "night light."
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021

Hi pam Thanks and yes Have corrected line 2 must be a bit tired Ha ha Many Cheers Chris

reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Jun-2021

You are welcome. I changed the review for you, too😊