Reviews from
1-6-1 contest
2 total reviews
Comment from
RodG
I like the metaphor chosen for this shortie--the stars being a night light. Where I live, that is unlikely because of the bright city lights just twenty miles away that cause the stars to fade. Rod
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
Hi Rod . Thank you for your review and nothing like a gorgeous night sky We have some lovely ones here
Cheers Chris
Comment from
Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-You have a good
topic, effective imagery,
and rhyme.
-The syllable count is good, too.
-I like the play on words
with "night light."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
Hi pam Thanks and yes Have corrected line 2 must be a bit tired Ha ha Many Cheers Chris
reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Jun-2021
You are welcome. I changed the review for you, too😊
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