"The Gift of Life."
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Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
I liked the message as its deeply personal, and therefore evoked emotion just as raw art should, but to speak objectively, the word play just seemed to simplified for the deeper meaning. I don't want to bring you down but rather help with my little 2 cents. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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I liked the message as its deeply personal, and therefore evoked emotion just as raw art should, but to speak objectively, the word play just seemed to simplified for the deeper meaning. I don't want to bring you down but rather help with my little 2 cents. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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I thank you very much Philip for coming aboard my gravy train!
Choo-Choo!
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Pantygynt
This poem is such a sad piece, in memory of a departed son. The esteem once held for him in life shines through in these lines penned in loving memory.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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This poem is such a sad piece, in memory of a departed son. The esteem once held for him in life shines through in these lines penned in loving memory.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2021
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Thanks again for your time and reviews.
Doctor Ricky 1024