Comment from MAMONIA

Excellent

Wow! Another great entry for the contest. Cute does not
even begin to describe this wonderful idea.
The picture is perfect, and the words hit home.
Good job.
Lots of luck in the contest.
Marie

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2021

Marie,

Thanks for your kind review. If you like so much, please vote.

Comment from Karen Estep

Excellent

How fun, my friend! This brought a smile to my face! I enjoyed your graphic display which certainly enhanced your 171 syllable story! Good luck in this contest! Keep writing!

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021

Thanks Karen for your generous review for my contest entry. I will take some credit for finding the image for my 1-7-1 verse.

Comment from Eunice Amero

Excellent

Sweet. Sqirruls are sweet but also a pest. Its ashame some people eat them. Thank you for sharing. Keep up the good work. You all have such good ideas.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2021

Eunice,

THANKS for your review and stars. I don?t believe I have ever had an urge or interest in having a squirrel dish (-; In my yard, we have a white-tailed squirrel family. They are not albinos, but there are some places in the US that have white squirrels, who are also school mascots.

reply by Eunice Amero on 22-Jun-2021

White wow they must be beaytiful. Are they tamed. Ours are pests. Your welcome

Comment from Cat Merto

Excellent

Nicely worded poem
1 7 1 , should be a jingle for a commercial
The color theme an photo work well to bring the 1-7-1 poem to life
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021

Thanks for that review. I have no commercial interest in a jingle. If you do, run with that idea.

reply by Cat Merto on 21-Jun-2021

Your welcome

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent poem for the contest with the required syllables and
nice addition of the rhymes.
That's a lucky squirrel to have granola bars for lunch. :)
Excellent picture to match.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2021

Thanks Robert!

Pleased you liked the overall presentation for my entry. Tony the Tiger may have competition from this squirrel in future food ads LOL