Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

How adorable! I wish I had a six for it. Yes, bees' bites are painful, I would flee for sure (lol).

Amazing presentation, imagery and visuals - I love the artwork you've chosen.

Good luck in the site's contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021

Thanks for the read and the encouraging review.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good artwork
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme,
as well as alliteration.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021

Thanks for the read and the encouraging review.

reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Jun-2021

You are welcome.