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Comment from
Elizabeth Emerald
Charming story--glad I caught this. The characters are adorable and the twist at the end is so clever. Fine work in a flash. My guess is I'll be back with congrats. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
Thank you for taking the time to read and for the encouraging review.
Comment from
humpwhistle
What surprises me is that the hawk didn't clamp onto at least one of the squirrels. I've seen it happen in my backyard. Anyway, the ultra polite bushy tails missed a meal--at least they didn't become one.
Best of luck at the polls.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
Yes, for sure it could have happened as you observed, but I chose to make these guys quick. Didn't want the blood. Thanks for the read and the feedback.
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