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Being Too Polite

A too long discussion has negative results.

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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Charming story--glad I caught this. The characters are adorable and the twist at the end is so clever. Fine work in a flash. My guess is I'll be back with congrats. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Thank you for taking the time to read and for the encouraging review.
Comment from humpwhistle
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What surprises me is that the hawk didn't clamp onto at least one of the squirrels. I've seen it happen in my backyard. Anyway, the ultra polite bushy tails missed a meal--at least they didn't become one.

Best of luck at the polls.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2021


reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
    Yes, for sure it could have happened as you observed, but I chose to make these guys quick. Didn't want the blood. Thanks for the read and the feedback.