Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-That is quite an
image with a good presentation.
-You have more courage
than I would.
-You wrote a good poem
that meets all of the requirements.
-A good topic, imagery, and rhyme.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021

Thanks for your review. Not sure if it was courage or youthful stupidity!!

reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Jun-2021

You are welcome; either way, I still wouldn't even think about it. Did you ever do it again?

Comment from RodG

Excellent

A very good 1-6-1 that gives the reader a vivid impression of what bungee jumping would be like for the first-timer. Could there be any sport more heart-stopping? Rod

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021

Thanks for your review. It was a tick off the bucket list.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Great 1-6-1 for the pop up contest. Aptly illustrated and rhymed perfectly. I see a winner here. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest. Blessings always,
Sal :))

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021

Thanks very much for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Bloomer Burbs

Excellent

Hi mystery writer

I really like your, 1-6-1. The rhymes don't feel forced, which is not that easy a task. Also very decretive, creating a strong image.

I wish you all the best in the contest. Should do well.
Pete

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your contest entry is in great form, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. Your words plus picture create a great little poem. Your syllable count is correct and your rhyming words work well. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021

Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.