The First Kiss
Love at first sight47 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This has a very creative presentation with print over what looks like paper and it was easy to read except for the letter 'g' which on your typewriter showed without the hook on the bottom.
But, no worries, I got the gist of the first kiss and wish you and your true love all the best that being in love has to offer.
Have a pleasant day!
Jesse
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This has a very creative presentation with print over what looks like paper and it was easy to read except for the letter 'g' which on your typewriter showed without the hook on the bottom.
But, no worries, I got the gist of the first kiss and wish you and your true love all the best that being in love has to offer.
Have a pleasant day!
Jesse
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a lovely poem with a great visual. However, I would remove the cream background because it cuts your letters off, making it appear as if your words are misspelled. Every "my" appear as mv. Other letters are also cut off. The beige background with the red letters should be fine. It was a good read.
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This is a lovely poem with a great visual. However, I would remove the cream background because it cuts your letters off, making it appear as if your words are misspelled. Every "my" appear as mv. Other letters are also cut off. The beige background with the red letters should be fine. It was a good read.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from robyn corum
Willie,
How adorably romantic! I hope it's absolutely true! A gal swoons to this type of love poetry and I also hope there's a girl in your life you can pass it to. That would truly make me smile! Thanks!
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Willie,
How adorably romantic! I hope it's absolutely true! A gal swoons to this type of love poetry and I also hope there's a girl in your life you can pass it to. That would truly make me smile! Thanks!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, loving, heartfelt, inspiring and
creative. I enjoyed the lovely read of this poem. The memory of
that first kiss will never be forgotten. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem well.
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The author's words are interesting, loving, heartfelt, inspiring and
creative. I enjoyed the lovely read of this poem. The memory of
that first kiss will never be forgotten. The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork is perfect and compliments this poem well.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The first kiss with the person we marry is something we never forget. The indication that this is someone you feel so right with, fills your heart and engraves it with the unique sensation. Your special tree is still there to remind you. I too have a special tree where my husband proposed. When I visit my son I can see it through his front window across the road in a small park.
Ralf
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The first kiss with the person we marry is something we never forget. The indication that this is someone you feel so right with, fills your heart and engraves it with the unique sensation. Your special tree is still there to remind you. I too have a special tree where my husband proposed. When I visit my son I can see it through his front window across the road in a small park.
Ralf
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is such a beautiful romantic poem. First kiss shared the tree, two people, very young at the time, fall madly in love and this love is carried through their entire lifetime.
Excellent imagery, visuals and presentation.
Thank you so much for sharing this.
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This is such a beautiful romantic poem. First kiss shared the tree, two people, very young at the time, fall madly in love and this love is carried through their entire lifetime.
Excellent imagery, visuals and presentation.
Thank you so much for sharing this.
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, when that first kiss leads to a life time of love it is a magical memory, a beautiful heartfelt poem, very well written****kahpot
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Excellent, when that first kiss leads to a life time of love it is a magical memory, a beautiful heartfelt poem, very well written****kahpot
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
