The First Kiss
Love at first sight47 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
That first kiss is always memorable and you have described it beautifully in this romantic poem of a lover's dream come true.
Excellent artwork and lovely rhyme.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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That first kiss is always memorable and you have described it beautifully in this romantic poem of a lover's dream come true.
Excellent artwork and lovely rhyme.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from karenina
People run helter-skelter all over the place, join "Tinder" -- and yet, it seems we chase love until it catches us. It's just the way it's supposed to be, I think. You meet, you sense, you feel, you kiss, you know! This is an interesting presentation... It almost feels like you took a typed poem and superimposed it on this lilac background. It gives it an old-time feeling. Very nice!
Karenina
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People run helter-skelter all over the place, join "Tinder" -- and yet, it seems we chase love until it catches us. It's just the way it's supposed to be, I think. You meet, you sense, you feel, you kiss, you know! This is an interesting presentation... It almost feels like you took a typed poem and superimposed it on this lilac background. It gives it an old-time feeling. Very nice!
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from Raul1
This is a thoughtful and romantic dream the kid must have had. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Good work!
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This is a thoughtful and romantic dream the kid must have had. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing! Good work!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
Willie,
This is a romantic rhyming poem about how some people know from the very beginning that itt is true love even if they are young. It is also a poem of loss and mourning.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Willie,
This is a romantic rhyming poem about how some people know from the very beginning that itt is true love even if they are young. It is also a poem of loss and mourning.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from nomi338
It does not take much more than that. When you know, you truly know. No amount of distraction can sway you from the love you know is for you and for you alone. Naysayers can say that you are too young, that you must live more and experience other kisses, but deep within your heart, you just know. In later years of life you look back and you are grateful that you did not lose track of the love that was yours from day one.
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It does not take much more than that. When you know, you truly know. No amount of distraction can sway you from the love you know is for you and for you alone. Naysayers can say that you are too young, that you must live more and experience other kisses, but deep within your heart, you just know. In later years of life you look back and you are grateful that you did not lose track of the love that was yours from day one.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from Marienkiefer
A wonderful poem, capturing the feeling and impact of a destined love.
-Original presentation of poem.
-Wonderful to witness and read about these kinds of love, most of all to experience it.
-Sparkling moment in your poem: Quite by chance I happened there as if looking for my love. She appeared, like in a dream....My observation is that this is a central theme of the poem. It was meant to be.
Lovely poem.
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A wonderful poem, capturing the feeling and impact of a destined love.
-Original presentation of poem.
-Wonderful to witness and read about these kinds of love, most of all to experience it.
-Sparkling moment in your poem: Quite by chance I happened there as if looking for my love. She appeared, like in a dream....My observation is that this is a central theme of the poem. It was meant to be.
Lovely poem.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Yes, I remember our first kiss, one that kept us seeing one another. No one kissed me the way he did. The kiss stayed the same until he died. Thank you for sharing this great story. It brought back wonderful memories. Have a great day.
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Yes, I remember our first kiss, one that kept us seeing one another. No one kissed me the way he did. The kiss stayed the same until he died. Thank you for sharing this great story. It brought back wonderful memories. Have a great day.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nicely done, Willie. That poem could have been written about my wife and me. Our first kiss was when we were fourteen and fifteen years old. Five years later we were married. Still married, fifty-seven years later.
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Nicely done, Willie. That poem could have been written about my wife and me. Our first kiss was when we were fourteen and fifteen years old. Five years later we were married. Still married, fifty-seven years later.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from Whitewave
Willie,
I like the picture and the poem which blend together perfectly. These are special memories to have and treasure forever. Your poem helps to keep them alive in print as well as in your heart.
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Willie,
I like the picture and the poem which blend together perfectly. These are special memories to have and treasure forever. Your poem helps to keep them alive in print as well as in your heart.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Willie.
-You wrote a good love poem that also tells a good story.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the opening verse as it takes you back in time.
-The oak tree was your special place where love can blossom.
-A very good concluding verse that shows how much you
loved her, and had many "wonderful years together."
-It sounds like a very special relationship.
-Thanks for sharing the story.
-In the line about puppy love, you left out the 'y' in everyone.
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-Nice image and presentation, Willie.
-You wrote a good love poem that also tells a good story.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the opening verse as it takes you back in time.
-The oak tree was your special place where love can blossom.
-A very good concluding verse that shows how much you
loved her, and had many "wonderful years together."
-It sounds like a very special relationship.
-Thanks for sharing the story.
-In the line about puppy love, you left out the 'y' in everyone.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
