The First Kiss
Love at first sight47 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Very sweet. You wrote shared? Has she passed? I can remember my first kiss but only for a moment. I was seventeen, ill, in bed and a neighborhood girl visited I never met. That was the only time our lips met.
Yours was much better.
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Very sweet. You wrote shared? Has she passed? I can remember my first kiss but only for a moment. I was seventeen, ill, in bed and a neighborhood girl visited I never met. That was the only time our lips met.
Yours was much better.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
Comment from June Sargent
Not sure if this is autobiographical - but either way, it's a beautiful love story! Young love can blossom and mature into a lifelong bond that can't be broken. I was only 18 when I met my husband. In our 54th year of marriage, I can personally vouch for puppy love...
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Not sure if this is autobiographical - but either way, it's a beautiful love story! Young love can blossom and mature into a lifelong bond that can't be broken. I was only 18 when I met my husband. In our 54th year of marriage, I can personally vouch for puppy love...
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
Comment from evilynne
A nice poem about young love, a first kiss, and subsequently enduring love. It is well written enjoyable reading. The picture adds nicely to the written words. EVi
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A nice poem about young love, a first kiss, and subsequently enduring love. It is well written enjoyable reading. The picture adds nicely to the written words. EVi
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful words to express a love that you both knew intuitively would be deep and lasting. You've expressed it perfectly referring to that special tree throughout. Lovely poem on a delightful theme. Well written.
Wendy
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Beautiful words to express a love that you both knew intuitively would be deep and lasting. You've expressed it perfectly referring to that special tree throughout. Lovely poem on a delightful theme. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Jun-2022
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Willie, I just used my last six star and am wishing they'd let me put two fives together for this. It is so romantic,sweet, and everything a wife could possibly ask for! She must be completely as head over heels in love with you as you are with her.
My husband does some sweet things for me, but nothing as special as having a poem written for me. Lol, He does however take the time to buy very sweet cards from the store. And I am a grateful and blessed wife considering he hates poetry. So once again my dear friend, this was as lovely as it can get and as beautiful words as any woman would ever want to feel as loved now as when you first kissed! Beautiful!
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Willie, I just used my last six star and am wishing they'd let me put two fives together for this. It is so romantic,sweet, and everything a wife could possibly ask for! She must be completely as head over heels in love with you as you are with her.
My husband does some sweet things for me, but nothing as special as having a poem written for me. Lol, He does however take the time to buy very sweet cards from the store. And I am a grateful and blessed wife considering he hates poetry. So once again my dear friend, this was as lovely as it can get and as beautiful words as any woman would ever want to feel as loved now as when you first kissed! Beautiful!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
You have eloquently captured through words a precious moment in time. This is a relatable memory to all, thanks for taking me back in time;)
The overall presentation works well. The soft pink mirrors the sentiment left. The rhymes are smooth and read lyrically as they dance down the page.
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You have eloquently captured through words a precious moment in time. This is a relatable memory to all, thanks for taking me back in time;)
The overall presentation works well. The soft pink mirrors the sentiment left. The rhymes are smooth and read lyrically as they dance down the page.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, I, too, believe in love at first sight. You did great job
expressing your thought and feelings on the subject. Your
lines are smooth with a good rhyme scheme. The image is
perfect.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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Yes, I, too, believe in love at first sight. You did great job
expressing your thought and feelings on the subject. Your
lines are smooth with a good rhyme scheme. The image is
perfect.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A well-flowing poem with unforced rhymes. The message stays on point. The images are clear. The vocabulary is warm and personal as is appropriate.
Thanks for a good read.
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A well-flowing poem with unforced rhymes. The message stays on point. The images are clear. The vocabulary is warm and personal as is appropriate.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from royowen
My first kiss was in a young teens party, I can't for the life of me remember who, but she sure was pretty, I know that much. This is beautifully written Jesse, the language is lyrical and fetching, the touch of a rose petal on the skin. Well done, blessings Roy,
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My first kiss was in a young teens party, I can't for the life of me remember who, but she sure was pretty, I know that much. This is beautifully written Jesse, the language is lyrical and fetching, the touch of a rose petal on the skin. Well done, blessings Roy,
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
Comment from Goodadvicechan
What a story full of love.
You romantically describe the love of two young weapons. It started with a kiss and ended having a happy marriage.
Sometimes it is too good to be true but good things happen.
Thanks for sharing such a love story
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What a story full of love.
You romantically describe the love of two young weapons. It started with a kiss and ended having a happy marriage.
Sometimes it is too good to be true but good things happen.
Thanks for sharing such a love story
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
