Entwine to Define and Find
Life is a great road - the wrong turns make it fun2 total reviews
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
So, what's the lesson, the bottom line?
Be demanding of new adventure to find
New places, new people - never recline!
Life is many great things; all should entwine. Of it all, entwine!
I've made a cheeky suggestion as written above. It saves having a period there and so helping the flow a little. It's a well written poem with some nice rhyming throughout.
I wish you well in the competition.
Take care, Pete
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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So, what's the lesson, the bottom line?
Be demanding of new adventure to find
New places, new people - never recline!
Life is many great things; all should entwine. Of it all, entwine!
I've made a cheeky suggestion as written above. It saves having a period there and so helping the flow a little. It's a well written poem with some nice rhyming throughout.
I wish you well in the competition.
Take care, Pete
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Cheeky? Cheeky is it? Puts me in the mood for a beef and kidney pie at me pub! Great to hear from you! But, how do you find the time to review poetry from yanks when there is such a plethora of reading material about Meghan and Harry? How do y'all hold up to it all. Anyway, thanks for stopping by and the tip.
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Megan and Harry who - BOOM :)
excellent reply, made me giggle out loud.
Comment from Earl Corp
Wow you've had a very full life filled with adventures. I like how you never settled and kept moving forward. Very nice job. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Wow you've had a very full life filled with adventures. I like how you never settled and kept moving forward. Very nice job. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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It has been fun. And, I recognize the Blessings of forgiveness I have received. Thanks for stopping by!