Something Wonderful
Life is.....9 total reviews
Comment from Theodore McDowell
congrats on prize. I know the love of children and how it fills the empty spaces in the soul. well done within strict structural guidelines. keep it up.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
congrats on prize. I know the love of children and how it fills the empty spaces in the soul. well done within strict structural guidelines. keep it up.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Thank you for this great review, it's so appreciated. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This made me smile so much. There is nothing more precious then family. Whenever I am down they lift me up and give me strength. This is a wonderful entry into the contest
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
This made me smile so much. There is nothing more precious then family. Whenever I am down they lift me up and give me strength. This is a wonderful entry into the contest
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your nice comments. :)
Comment from Cathy M
I love this poem. It made me think of my daughter and everything she has gone through. She keeps an upbeat attitude and always makes sure no matter what she is doing she gives her mom a call. Nice job.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
I love this poem. It made me think of my daughter and everything she has gone through. She keeps an upbeat attitude and always makes sure no matter what she is doing she gives her mom a call. Nice job.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Your daughter sounds like a kind and loving person. Aren't we lucky? Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)
Comment from equestrik
I like how this write went from feelings of saddness and negativity to realiing the sweet joy that life gives us in the most simple of ways. It is uplifting in the end. Nice job.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
I like how this write went from feelings of saddness and negativity to realiing the sweet joy that life gives us in the most simple of ways. It is uplifting in the end. Nice job.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
This poem is beautifully written your daughters are so lucky to have such a wonderful mom. Family is so important and makes life worth living. 6 stars go to you!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
This poem is beautifully written your daughters are so lucky to have such a wonderful mom. Family is so important and makes life worth living. 6 stars go to you!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you, how wonderful to get this exceptional review...I appreciate it more then you know. :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Something Wonderful" What a great acrostic you have penned using these words. Great rhyming throughout. I like that you have stressed the importance of family being there for us. During this last year and a half, I treasure the contact my family has kept with me.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
"Something Wonderful" What a great acrostic you have penned using these words. Great rhyming throughout. I like that you have stressed the importance of family being there for us. During this last year and a half, I treasure the contact my family has kept with me.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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I'm so glad your family is there for you, there is nothing more important. Thank you for reading my poem. :)
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You are welcome
Comment from zanya
The joy and peace that sharing with family can bring 'a daughter's sweet smile 'is portrayed effectively here in this Acrostic -thanks for sharing and a lovely pic
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
The joy and peace that sharing with family can bring 'a daughter's sweet smile 'is portrayed effectively here in this Acrostic -thanks for sharing and a lovely pic
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thank you for this nice review, it's so great of you to take the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your acrostic and particularly enjoyed the last line as your daughter brings you happiness with her smile, great rhymes and sentiments, a fine presentation, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
I enjoyed your acrostic and particularly enjoyed the last line as your daughter brings you happiness with her smile, great rhymes and sentiments, a fine presentation, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much. :)
Comment from Ronni
Such a beautiful and gratifying sharing of all the 'Something Wonderful'
feelings, assurances and abiding love from a most loving and
in touch kind of daughter! Certainly offsets and qwells those off days of feeling lost, alone and regrets about past misfortunes or anticipations.
You have a very precious daughter, no doubt she is so because you]
too are an everprecious mom to her! Best of luck in contest!
Best wishes, Ronni
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
Such a beautiful and gratifying sharing of all the 'Something Wonderful'
feelings, assurances and abiding love from a most loving and
in touch kind of daughter! Certainly offsets and qwells those off days of feeling lost, alone and regrets about past misfortunes or anticipations.
You have a very precious daughter, no doubt she is so because you]
too are an everprecious mom to her! Best of luck in contest!
Best wishes, Ronni
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you for this great review and your kind words...both are very appreciated. :)