Rain Sinks In Soil
5/7/5 Late Summer Haiku19 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Rain Sinks Into Soil', is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. It was a pleasure to read and review a poem of this standard.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2021
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'Rain Sinks Into Soil', is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. It was a pleasure to read and review a poem of this standard.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from Boogienights
A cycle of the natural world and very tasty I've heard. You'd never catch me eating them though! I do live to listen to them, they are like white noise. Thanks for sharing. :)
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A cycle of the natural world and very tasty I've heard. You'd never catch me eating them though! I do live to listen to them, they are like white noise. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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I wouldn't eat them either. I heard you can get high if you eat them but you would have to eat a lot of them. LoL
Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from Mary Vigasin
A wonderful poem written about these amazing creatures.
Your pictures compliment your words.
Thank you for introducing me too these creatures.
Regards
Mary
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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A wonderful poem written about these amazing creatures.
Your pictures compliment your words.
Thank you for introducing me too these creatures.
Regards
Mary
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
These are great pictures, and if you tie them up with interesting author's notes, you've got yourself one excellent haiku. The poem itself plays second to the other two I mentioned. It seems informational as well. I know the sound of cicadas...it is very distinguishable from other sounds. In So Cal, I grew up with grasshoppers. But in Northern California, they have tiny frogs that sound like grasshoppers. It is a bit confusing, but I like them anyway.
Thanks for letting me share and for sharing your information with me.
Take care,
Jesse
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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These are great pictures, and if you tie them up with interesting author's notes, you've got yourself one excellent haiku. The poem itself plays second to the other two I mentioned. It seems informational as well. I know the sound of cicadas...it is very distinguishable from other sounds. In So Cal, I grew up with grasshoppers. But in Northern California, they have tiny frogs that sound like grasshoppers. It is a bit confusing, but I like them anyway.
Thanks for letting me share and for sharing your information with me.
Take care,
Jesse
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Jesse, thank you very much for your review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
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You're very welcome.
And thanks for the Gypsy hugs.
Have a good evening,
Jesse
Comment from Erika Seshadri
What a beautiful, cool poem for a very cool bug. Look at those transparent wings!! We don't seem to have these where I am right now. We might be too far south. But, I remember them from the summertime when I lived in Kansas City. They are loud!!
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What a beautiful, cool poem for a very cool bug. Look at those transparent wings!! We don't seem to have these where I am right now. We might be too far south. But, I remember them from the summertime when I lived in Kansas City. They are loud!!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Yes, they very loud. Imagine when you have thousands together. Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from equestrik
I was living in Tennessee when the cicadas emeged-I had never heard anything like it. I enjoyed your presentation and your author notes as well. All the best to you.
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I was living in Tennessee when the cicadas emeged-I had never heard anything like it. I enjoyed your presentation and your author notes as well. All the best to you.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from irishauthorme
Neat Haiku, a little story in just eleven words. Amazing coincidence, we have the little chirper out here in Wyoming, and yes, noisy!
Remember you from some time ago. I do not get on FS too often, too busy outside this time of year.
Will read more of your work.
irish
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Neat Haiku, a little story in just eleven words. Amazing coincidence, we have the little chirper out here in Wyoming, and yes, noisy!
Remember you from some time ago. I do not get on FS too often, too busy outside this time of year.
Will read more of your work.
irish
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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I took two years off due to health issues. Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from Lana Marie
Nice haiku about those noisy little creatures that come to life in the night.
Love the pictures to go with this well written poem. I remember trying to explain to my 2 1/2 year old granddaughter what these bugs were because she would be somewhat afraid when she heard them on our walks past a heavily wooded area in our neighborhood.
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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Nice haiku about those noisy little creatures that come to life in the night.
Love the pictures to go with this well written poem. I remember trying to explain to my 2 1/2 year old granddaughter what these bugs were because she would be somewhat afraid when she heard them on our walks past a heavily wooded area in our neighborhood.
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from royowen
I must admit I agree with you, they are a "noisy" bunch, their mass meetings are really quite thunderous, beautifully written Gypsy, you've produced another gem. Well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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I must admit I agree with you, they are a "noisy" bunch, their mass meetings are really quite thunderous, beautifully written Gypsy, you've produced another gem. Well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
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Most welcome
