The Fog Shrouded Cat
A misty morning interlude ...41 total reviews
Comment from Zan Zan
(whispers*- im in love with the image. Omg)
Listen, this wasn't recognized for no reason.
Every line rolled smoothly. The atmosphere is dope, Just dope. I enjoyed thissssssaaaa
~Five stars~
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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(whispers*- im in love with the image. Omg)
Listen, this wasn't recognized for no reason.
Every line rolled smoothly. The atmosphere is dope, Just dope. I enjoyed thissssssaaaa
~Five stars~
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Hi Zan Zan,
Love your review and dope comments :-) Sooo glad to meet you!
I?m over 21 but I can still laugh at myself and enjoy Life.
Looking forward to reading your work ❤️
Always,
Senyai
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Hi Zan Zan,
Love your review and dope comments :-) Sooo glad to meet you!
I?m over 21 but I can still laugh at myself and enjoy Life.
Looking forward to reading your work ❤️
Always,
Senyai
Comment from rspoet
Hello Senyai,
This is a marvelous nonet poem and entry for the contest
with wonderful imagery and description.
You've used sound and creative wording to create a mysterious atmosphere;
the assonance and alliteration work perfectly.
Well done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Hello Senyai,
This is a marvelous nonet poem and entry for the contest
with wonderful imagery and description.
You've used sound and creative wording to create a mysterious atmosphere;
the assonance and alliteration work perfectly.
Well done.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Hi Robert,
Thank you so very much for a wonderful review and gift of those shiny six stars. Your thoughts mean so much to me coming from such an accomplished writer as yourself :-)
Stay healthy my friend.
Always,
Senyai
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Hi Robert,
Thank you so very much for a wonderful review and gift of those shiny six stars. Your thoughts mean so much to me coming from such an accomplished writer as yourself :-)
Stay healthy my friend.
Always,
Senyai
Comment from kiwisteveh
I enjoyed the visual image of the cat stalking its prey on a misty morning. I wondered if you originally had 'misty' but chose to chop one syllable to keep the form...
You have also used rhyme cleverly in this piece - something not easy to do in a nonet.
Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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I enjoyed the visual image of the cat stalking its prey on a misty morning. I wondered if you originally had 'misty' but chose to chop one syllable to keep the form...
You have also used rhyme cleverly in this piece - something not easy to do in a nonet.
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Hi Steve,
Good to hear from you! Thank you for such a superb review and thoughtful comments in my little Nonet.
I am not sure if I considered ?Misty morning? first but probably did, then chopped the extra syllable due to the rules. I chose ?Mist morning? instead ?Morning mist? to emphasize morning for the feel of it.
Thank you for your interest and critique!
Stay healthy my friend :-)
Always,
Senyai
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Hi Steve,
Good to hear from you! Thank you for such a superb review and thoughtful comments in my little Nonet.
I am not sure if I considered ?Misty morning? first but probably did, then chopped the extra syllable due to the rules. I chose ?Mist morning? instead ?Morning mist? to emphasize morning for the feel of it.
Thank you for your interest and critique!
Stay healthy my friend :-)
Always,
Senyai
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
A lovely nonet which is a pleasure to read as well as skillful. I like the alliteration and sounds within the poem, very evocative. Enjoyed very much an excellent competition entry, good luck and well done kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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A lovely nonet which is a pleasure to read as well as skillful. I like the alliteration and sounds within the poem, very evocative. Enjoyed very much an excellent competition entry, good luck and well done kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021
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Hi Meia,
Oh thank you so much for your lovely review and comments on my little Nonet ? and for your well wishes too :-)
Good luck to you as well ❤️
Always,
Senyai
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Hi Meia,
Oh thank you so much for your lovely review and comments on my little Nonet ? and for your well wishes too :-)
Good luck to you as well ❤️
Always,
Senyai
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Beautiful imagery evoking truths and emotions that seem just out of reach of the poet. A sense of connection with the cat is shrouded below the mist. The existential question is how to reconnect with something that seems to linger in the memory and in life but remains hidden.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Beautiful imagery evoking truths and emotions that seem just out of reach of the poet. A sense of connection with the cat is shrouded below the mist. The existential question is how to reconnect with something that seems to linger in the memory and in life but remains hidden.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Hi Theodore,
Thank you for an insightful review and interesting thoughts.
Both are appreciated!
Always,
Senyai
Comment from Sanku
I love cats .And I can very well relate to her stalking the thrushes even in the misty morning. The picture is beautiful with its black and white background. All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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I love cats .And I can very well relate to her stalking the thrushes even in the misty morning. The picture is beautiful with its black and white background. All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Hi Sanku,
Hope you are feeling better these days. I pray CoVid leaves the world stage and disappears!
Thank you very much for your thoughtful review and comments. I appreciate them more than you know ❣️
Always,
Senyai
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Hi Sanku,
Hope you are feeling better these days. I pray CoVid leaves the world stage and disappears!
Thank you very much for your thoughtful review and comments. I appreciate them more than you know ❣️
Always,
Senyai
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thank you .yes I fell much better .Yes let us all pray for this virus to leave us.
Comment from rjuselius
This is a brilliant entry for this particular contest dear senyai! I love the soft sentiment and philosophical commentary.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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This is a brilliant entry for this particular contest dear senyai! I love the soft sentiment and philosophical commentary.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Hi Rebekka,
Thank you thank you for such a superb review and lovely thoughts ? and for the gift of six stars!
I love cats too ❣️
Always,
Senyai
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Hi Rebekka,
Thank you thank you for such a superb review and lovely thoughts ? and for the gift of six stars!
I love cats too ❣️
Always,
Senyai
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your nonet is vividly descriptive, skillfully composed, and appealing.
You created the perfect setting for the cautious, stealthy movements of the mysterious cat.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Your nonet is vividly descriptive, skillfully composed, and appealing.
You created the perfect setting for the cautious, stealthy movements of the mysterious cat.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Hi Janice,
Thank you so much for a stunning review and kind comments. Both are greatly appreciated!
Always,
Senyai
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
SENYAI:
It took me a second to realize this was a nonet but it flowed so nicely in its descended syllable count, there could be no doubt. The beautiful photo is a superb match for your wonderful poem. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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SENYAI:
It took me a second to realize this was a nonet but it flowed so nicely in its descended syllable count, there could be no doubt. The beautiful photo is a superb match for your wonderful poem. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Hi Rdfrdmom2,
Oh thank you for your great review and kind thoughts on my little Nonet. It is my first attempt :-)
Have a great weekend,
Senyai
Comment from Erika Seshadri
I enjoyed reading this nonet. It had some great elements of description and vivid imagery. The picture you chose to go with it is perfect and enhances the mood of it. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Have a great night.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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I enjoyed reading this nonet. It had some great elements of description and vivid imagery. The picture you chose to go with it is perfect and enhances the mood of it. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Have a great night.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2021
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Hi Erika,
Thank you so much for your great review and kind thoughts on my little Nonet. My first attempt :-)
Have a great weekend,
Senyai
