I Apologise
A poem for all my great reviews.5 total reviews
Comment from Bekah Heart
This poem has such great flow! I am new to fanstory and am really appreciating the different styles of poetry and topics people write about. I enjoyed reading your piece out loud and the more I read the more I was able to pick up and understand what was going on (people should also take the time instead of criticizing is what I mean). I am glad you are staying true to your heritage and not conforming just to make other people feel comfortable. Great post!
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This poem has such great flow! I am new to fanstory and am really appreciating the different styles of poetry and topics people write about. I enjoyed reading your piece out loud and the more I read the more I was able to pick up and understand what was going on (people should also take the time instead of criticizing is what I mean). I am glad you are staying true to your heritage and not conforming just to make other people feel comfortable. Great post!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from royowen
Perhaps you need to look up the the word "gracious" or egalitarian, instead of using a non written language in supposed Scottish, I can't remember Jesus looking down on His disciples. There's more than one way of elevating oneself in his own eyes, or perhaps I should have capitalised...His, Roy
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Perhaps you need to look up the the word "gracious" or egalitarian, instead of using a non written language in supposed Scottish, I can't remember Jesus looking down on His disciples. There's more than one way of elevating oneself in his own eyes, or perhaps I should have capitalised...His, Roy
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I found this poem a bit difficult to read, but I waded through it and your clever language gave your words some authenticity here. Your accent shone here, love Dolly x
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I found this poem a bit difficult to read, but I waded through it and your clever language gave your words some authenticity here. Your accent shone here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Jun-2021
Comment from irishauthorme
Hey, my second shot at your vernacular, read it faster this time! I learn a lot from other authors & poets just by reviewing their work, and I also get ideas for things i want to express.
Did make Australia as a sailor, US Navy, tied up in Sydney but traveled around the country a bit, nicest people in the world and absolutely the best beer!
Good work,
Cheers,
irish
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Hey, my second shot at your vernacular, read it faster this time! I learn a lot from other authors & poets just by reviewing their work, and I also get ideas for things i want to express.
Did make Australia as a sailor, US Navy, tied up in Sydney but traveled around the country a bit, nicest people in the world and absolutely the best beer!
Good work,
Cheers,
irish
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
Comment from Susan Newell
I'm relatively new here, so this is my first review for you. I was fascinated by your language, although it took me a little time to understand all of it. Please forgive my ignorance when I ask, is the actual Scottish, which I understand is a language distinguishable from English?
I wish you luck in reading all those reviews, but my suspicious side tells me they are imaginary.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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I'm relatively new here, so this is my first review for you. I was fascinated by your language, although it took me a little time to understand all of it. Please forgive my ignorance when I ask, is the actual Scottish, which I understand is a language distinguishable from English?
I wish you luck in reading all those reviews, but my suspicious side tells me they are imaginary.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2021
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The 2116 reviews are real I have over 200 poems on Fanstory many with sound. Listen to a few and understand.Go to my portfolio. Thanks for the review the first I have answered in many many a year. Alex.
